|Reviews for Threads of Fate|
| rickybot chapter 3 . 1/19
would you please continue with the story or is that all of the story you could think of?
| rick chapter 3 . 1/19
wheres chapter 3 i want to keep reading
| Butterfree chapter 3 . 7/31/2010
Definetly an interesting tale you've got going. I'm a bit confused whether it's meant to be an AU or not, but the elements of it definetly spell out 'threads of fate', espeically with the references to destiny.
I love Mint and Maya's personalities here. You've got both of them down quite well, though I did find some scenes to be overly-descriptive. It's almost a bit jarring at how consistant the amount of description is, but using different amounts but keeping it in the same range may be better.
Good luck in any future writting!
| cookiemania789 chapter 3 . 1/15/2010
This looks interesting.
| ReLiC AnGeL chapter 3 . 11/16/2009
What an unexpected turn of events in this fic. _
| DarkmoonFlute288 chapter 2 . 10/15/2009
Wow, this is fantastic so far. It's an interesting alternate take so far on events we all know and love. I'll be waiting for the next chapter with anticipation.
| Summoner of Dusk chapter 2 . 9/26/2009
This looks promising. I especially liked how you fleshed out Mint's background. I can't wait to see what you have in store for her!
| ReLiC AnGeL chapter 2 . 9/25/2009
This was beautifully done. I loved it. Even though it was meant to be set at the begining of Mint's game, you've managed to make the plotline flow effortlessly with such lovely details that I couldn't stop reading this. The end really caught me off guard too. _
| Krisini Nanini chapter 1 . 9/16/2009
i really don't have a skill on weaving lengthy texts like this. haha i'm more of a poem writer i guess. _ i went over the prologue and it seemed like i'm watching anime _ the imagery is good, the idea very fascinating and you really have a good taste of coherence. you're good in building characters _ rue and mint occupies a part of my mind now, somehow wondering what would happen to their journey next _ keep it up! i'll be your number one audience if you don't mind _
| xXxKatsumixXx chapter 1 . 9/12/2009
Oh god! She can't start another adventure! The world will surly perish! Then again I am doing the same thing... oh well, great job! _
| ReLiC AnGeL chapter 1 . 9/11/2009
I'm liking the sound of where this story is going. _ You've done a wonderful job at keeping Mint in character. The way you made Mint's memory and the preasent blend well together was flawless and I could easily see that this fic will be entertaining and keep me begging for more. Since you have done a wonderful job at writing this, I'm gonna fave it! -_- I'm waiting to see how the next chapter will turn out.