Reviews for Son of the Corps
VizeerLord chapter 3 . 10/24/2015
Beautiful idea...
The whole thing was not even a full chapter little lone a full story.

In chapter one, Becoming Bester; we need to know his thoughts on being ripped from his time, he is more then just a Psi-cop, but a Protecter of Earth Force Law. Did Xander pick up a PPC, or did he have one at home...

Chapter two, Morning After; Xander would have needed to spend time building his wall, hearing his Parents thoughts, Harmony's (is she really that simple and shallow, or is it an act?) Snyder's and his nasty, petty, and fearful bullying ideas.

Chapter three, loved how you decribed Willow and Buffy, humming bird and big cat, but no Cordy?

More please
Netchka chapter 3 . 11/1/2014
Cool start to the story. Can't wait to read more.
jabbarulez chapter 3 . 12/13/2013
Xanders sharing his head with Besker? ROFL!
Herdcat chapter 3 . 12/3/2013
oooh more story! I was so glad when I went to reread and noticed this :) oooh I love Zander/ Bester this is SUCH a cool idea and you write it really well - the part about Buffy thinking in French is very clever - as is the idea that Zander wouldn't understand but Bester would - I would love to see where this goes - if you felt like updating it further!
Rosa Mundi chapter 3 . 7/22/2013
This is fun. Dunno how I missed it before.
renatria chapter 3 . 5/17/2013
Excellent Bester voice. I hope you are going to use material from the B5 Psi-Corps novels. They really added depth to Mr. Bester, and I found him much more sympathetic than I expected. I'm glad to see you've updated recently, and hope to see more.
tanithlipsky chapter 3 . 5/14/2013
oh boy. and more complications.
CynthiaW chapter 3 . 5/12/2013
I'm glad to see this story got updated. I can't wait to see where you take it. This was a cool twist to the episode from the series.

I find it interesting that Buffy's mind is thinking in the language that would have been spoken by the princess she was dressed as, even though Buffy never learned it. And Willow is trying to straighten out the logic of what happened when she was a ghost. Cordelia is her typical self, of course, as she wasn't transformed into her costume. Giles's mind is full of thoughts typical of a scholar, and Xander seems to think he's on the right track of what happened to him.

Excellent job on this. Hope you update again soon.
Bobboky chapter 3 . 5/6/2013
very good
gaul1 chapter 3 . 5/6/2013
Good short chapter...
Meh chapter 3 . 5/6/2013
Woo, more of this, great! Bester really is one of the coolest, creepiest villains out there. When you want to reach through the screen to throttle or beat a character for the things he's done, thats when you know the writers have done their job correctly.
lord Martiya chapter 1 . 5/6/2013
Freakin' Bester in the Buffyverse... Isn't it overkill?
Carma Nightmare chapter 3 . 5/5/2013
trongod chapter 3 . 5/5/2013
I like the idea, but the incredibly short chapters seem clumsy as a reader. Not to mention frustrating...

And Bester isn't a villain... exactly... Rather like Mal from Firefly, he's got his own set if rules that he lives by... OK, maybe more the Operative from Serenity than Mal, but I hope you can see my point of view. All in all, he isn't that far from Xander, as witnessed by his statement that he would kill Buffy should her actions or inactions cause Willow to be harmed or killed.

More, please, and if the Muses could inspire longer chapters, I'd pour libations of high grade booze upon Their altars...
deitarionSSokolow chapter 3 . 5/5/2013
Good to see you're still working on this though, in all honesty, I would have preferred a longer wait for a longer chapter.

A long chapter (as long as it's not "whole novella in a single chapter" long) is much more satisfying than a short one, all else being equal, since it gives me more time to immerse myself into what I'm reading and, since you can't possibly write quickly enough for me to NOT put the story out of mind between chapters, all else is effectively equal.
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