Reviews for Here Is Gone
BasedOnAStoryline chapter 5 . 9/30/2009
haha so much for Vardene being the patient
Lady Livia chapter 5 . 9/30/2009
Attractive!

How is he so attractive!

Ah! I need one!

Go and fetch me one!

xx

More. Now.
Lady Livia chapter 4 . 9/27/2009
...*deep breaths*

Wow... my heartrate just went through the roof.

Should that have been that attractive? I don't know, but it WAS!

Holy crap.

More More More... Now
Kasloumor chapter 4 . 9/26/2009
Well, I like it... of course. Who wouldn't?
Mirabella Twain chapter 4 . 9/25/2009
Vardene is so volatile! Nice!

I like how he calls Charlie "Little witch", even if he is evil at the time. :)
BasedOnAStoryline chapter 4 . 9/25/2009
:D Catlyn is SO CUTE! And Vardene is so tragic. His life needs to be fixed desperately.

For some reason I kept reading the line: "knew better than to bring these kinds of feelings into a healing room." as "knew better than to bring these kinds of CHILDREN into a healing room." and I could not figure out for the life of me what children you meant. I got it eventually though!

More now, please!
BasedOnAStoryline chapter 3 . 9/22/2009
I really, really enjoy Vardene's character! I feel so bad for him. And Catlyn.

Write more, please!
Kasloumor chapter 3 . 9/22/2009
This is wonderful - good job! Keep 'em coming :-)
Lady Livia chapter 3 . 9/22/2009
OH!

I so want them all! You make attractive men!

Quick! Fashion me one out of clay and then use your magic powers to bring him to life for me.

...he must be able to sing.
Mirabella Twain chapter 3 . 9/22/2009
Awesome chapter!

But poor little Vardene! I like how he comes accross, he's very volatile me thinks. :) And wounded. And Valen should be more observant, but i still love him! :)
Lady Livia chapter 2 . 9/20/2009
attractive attractive attractive.
Lady Livia chapter 1 . 9/20/2009
Why have I not reviweved this before?

What kind of friend am I.

...anywho... you know I love it and you need to write heaps more to satisfy my needs.

xx
Mirabella Twain chapter 2 . 9/16/2009
"Soul stealing." I like these kind of lines. :) Very emotive, may i say.

And poor little Vardene! It makes me sadder when he wont fight, that he thinks so bad of the situation.

Nicely done.

Oh and i love Valen! So need a spin off there...

Hint hint.
ephona chapter 2 . 9/16/2009
very nice. a new kind of story
BasedOnAStoryline chapter 2 . 9/16/2009
I'm really enjoying this story! I meant to review chapter 1 but couldn't find the time! I really love Vardene as a character. He's interesting! I felt terrible during the first chapter when he's beng tortured but I'm glad that Lia has taken an interest in him!

Ps. I'm sorry in advance about any misspellings or random symbols left in this review. I'm in math class and on my phone so it's hard to see what I'm typing on the little screen! :D UPDATE SOON!
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