|Reviews for Shoot|
| Narusaku chapter 1 . 10/1/2013
WOW i almost cried when alice died
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/23/2012
im sorry but there is too much drama but i guess thats what this story is about
| whatdotheydream chapter 1 . 7/6/2012
Wow...I am crying...And laughing because I'm crying...And making sarcastic remarks at Gilbert, the poor man. Geez...
| Oblivion Songstress chapter 1 . 12/14/2011
Awwwwwwww! Poor Oz
Good Story And I H8 To Say It 8ut It's A Pretty Valid Story Line
| lotbe chapter 1 . 10/30/2010
Wow. This is so well-written! The line "shoot me" was just awesome. And the characters are so in-character. The pressure Gil felt when he was forced to decide to kill Alice just before time was up was realistic, it explained the slightly insane thoughts that came afterwards in a way, too. As for some comments that say Gil is OOC, I don't think it's true. I mean, Gil was under a lot of pressure and all. (And if he didn't, this story won't be here.) Oz was very well-portrayed too. He finally lost it when Alice died. Personally, my favorite is Alice. Maybe it's because she's my favorite character. But, as I said, the line "shoot me" just blew me away.
I talked too much...
Thanks for the read!
| starlingnight chapter 1 . 9/1/2010
Definitely OOC for Gil - he's not insane and he wouldn't kill Alice, ever - but ignoring that, this is good.
"Shoot me." No, Alice! Don't sacrifice yourself :( That was sad.
| MOON PORE chapter 1 . 7/8/2010
Oh ;-; this was so sad.
| WolfspiritSD chapter 1 . 6/6/2010
wow... this story made me cry...so much.
I love it but hate it...
Maybe it's just because I'm reading this in the middle of the night and I'm really tired but Oz really does bring up a good point...
I hate Gil now! but I still feel sorry for him, and he's still a good charcter...I don't know...
This story is written so well!
| Morningstar04 chapter 1 . 6/2/2010
… aww poor Oz, I'd say poor Gil too but he killed my favorite character! Did Alice love Oz too cause then the story would be REALLY bittersweet. Still liked it though!
| patri-300 chapter 1 . 5/18/2010
oh man you killed her *gasp* o.o, that was cruel...poor Alice...and Oz... not gilbert now i hate him...
| yoru-anime-yume chapter 1 . 2/5/2010
This was really good, thank you for posting! I can definitely see something like that happening.
| MistressLouise chapter 1 . 12/12/2009
O, sweet cruelty thy name be trickyfrog.
Somehow, I wanted Oz to be even meaner.
| Suki90 chapter 1 . 11/29/2009
I love the story..
Hey, can I traduce your story to Spanish?
| Alex chapter 1 . 11/26/2009
Um... Author, can I translate this text in Russian? I want to publish it on the rissian fansite, ang I guess it'll be right to ask you for permission)
| Alex chapter 1 . 11/24/2009
OMG, it's too heavy for me. i'm just 'bout cryin
But the text is very good