It's interesting and I wish there was more, but this is a highly disturbing story of a girl with ever changing powers and I can't tell if she knows that she's evil or just ignorant.

LMHO

Have you read "Ensign Sue Must Die"? It's a web comic...one you should definitely read if you haven't already.

This was perfect!

It is true and I agree with you it is almost impossible to write a MS without totally butchering everything Tolkien thought was important. I love the bit about Gollum.

This was 100% .FUL! lol...The Mary Sue's should have their own Middle Earth realm for cheese sake. Thank for this glorious bit of fun!

HAHAAHA! Thank you!

Dude this is hilarious. I love how you managed to make it seem like complete story with so little detail this is awesome

Oh my god! Love it! X'D

I still think you should do one more with Nary Sue in Rohan, Helm's Deep, and Minas Tirith; their numbers seem to have gone up

YES! DIE, DIE, DIE!

Ehhh... I just wanted to say that the overabundance of Sues in the Middle Earth annoys me just a tiny little bit.

THANK YOU, Gollum. When all hope is lost, somehow you are the one to make everything right again.

Fucking awesome. Yes.

So glad I clicked on this. All the favorites and follows for a 5,000 one shot in LOTR kinda bewildered me, but now I totally understand. :D

Bwa ha ha HA HA HA HA! The words, they utterly fail to encompass the perfection that is It's... ack! Erp. Yeah. Hrmph. Ahem.

Wonderful, truly. Came to this via a link on , and so, so glad I did. You've picked up (and picked golloping great holes in) so many irksome elements of bad stories and made them a delight to read. You even knocked a few holes in the fourth wall while you were about it! Bonus!

Love this! Perfect in so many ways.

XD Legolas

The Legolas parts made me cackle. Seriously, the poor elf would be horrified to read all the stories featuring him and the Mary Sues.