Hi! So, so far this is pretty good.

A couple of more chapters would be nice{hint, hint;-)}

I really dont have much to add to this. Oh yeah quick question.

In Harry's fifth year Dumbledore hired Umbitch {sorry typo ;-)}because the ministry was forcing him to. Or thats what i think it was. I used to be a big Dumbledore supporter, but I thought about it, and you're right.

Hello again,

I am such a H&G fan I hope you write more.
Is Harry going to let Ginny know and the others to start getting in shape too.

I know some people put R & Hr down but I think they all can work together.
My husban and daughter kee telling me they are not real!

But we know different. Plese write more.
Thanks for the email
Good luck in all you do.

Hello,

This is a good start I can't wait to read more.

Seeya

very good, i'm looking forward to chapter 3! Chop Chop!

-thanks, Lyric

oh... so sweet, and good! This is definitely going to be a good story!

-thanks, Lyric

good good! lols keep writing!

Gina xx

Ah, so you're turning it into a Manipulative!Dumbledore story. Better and better.

Nice start, albeit rather typical for post-OotP stories. Hopefully you can take this in new directions (fluffy ones, possibly).

Thanks!

Wow that is short.

Rather interesting start so far. Keep up the good work.

well done Mina! you did really well, it's in bite size chunks and easy to read, good going, keep it up! lols

Gina x

GOOD START... KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK

This sort of story's been done before many times, so you'll have to write it pretty well, and also make it fairly unique. That said, good start and hope you write more.

For further writing, you may be interested in this site:

w w w . geocities sapienti_university_of_magic (without the spaces)

It's a role playing site based on the Harry Potter world.

Either way, good luck with your writing and I look forward to reading more.

Melora Brockert, SUM student

awe cute