Reviews for Aftermath
Guest chapter 1 . 1/20
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ChucklingDevil chapter 18 . 3/17/2014
Wow, that was an amazing piece of reading.
I enjoyed all the interlacing paths (and just flail in my head at how you could have remembered it all!) and I love the gritty quality you brought to it.
This truly was an amazing read , I just can't quite describe everything that I liked so much about it.
MingiPie05 chapter 18 . 2/15/2014
Just came across this Story and I must say it was unbelievably enthralling, you really knew how to bring the characters to life while keeping them very authentic.
loppytaffy chapter 2 . 4/3/2013
You do know that Venice has been married since 1000ad, right? Like, in real life?
Venice is married to the sea, and has a festival every May to celebrate.
It's called Festa della Sensa.
oEnvy chapter 3 . 12/9/2012
Okay, serisouly, this story seems really nice, but I just can't read it with all of those accents. ;o; I can handle a few accents, like zhis. But its hard to read with all you have...
KokoroNoTakara chapter 18 . 9/3/2012
xXthenextbookwormXx chapter 6 . 5/15/2012
I don't think you should worry about the 'what the ef' bit, Canadian French will be mashed up with English all the time... And even if the French isn't perfect, I got the point, so it's not a terrible problem. You're mangling it no worse than I could, and I theoretically have some French Education.
ChatterBOXX chapter 1 . 3/23/2012
Wow! This was a great chapter! I can't wait to read more :)!
anonym chapter 2 . 2/27/2012
You said you need help with the german language Ive noticed a mistakes in chapter 2 the word friend is written Freund in german.

Nouns are written in capetal letters in german.

Other than that I like your story so far.

Sorry for my horrid English
uzamakinaruta chapter 18 . 2/24/2012
after 4 days of reading (when i could between school and house work) i've finally finished your amazing story. the flow was smooth the story easy to follow. i've even been talking with a german accent because of this! XD anyways, good job. cant wait to read more. :)
SasuxXxNaru-4ever chapter 3 . 2/15/2012
I really like this story but u writing in their accents makes it hard for me to read... ill kept trying tho!
nomnom chapter 18 . 1/25/2012
I liked your plot - I really did. I just have one problem with this story, and it's not a small one.

I can't understand what Germany says half of the time! I have to look through the sentence a few times and say it out loud to understand, and that's horribly frustrating. I like the idea of adding in an accent, but not so prominent that I don't know what he's saying. Prussia says "Westen boughd de mosd cheap bier he coult und I'm nod allowt to drink de goot schtuff tonighd." It takes a lot of practice to understand this.
Gigi101Samba chapter 17 . 1/3/2012
Severed... hands...? Holy shitake mushrooms, Gilbert has an Amityville (correct spelling D:?) toaster? O.O EVERYONE RUN FOR YOU LIVES, WE'RE ALL DOOOOOOMED! D:

On another note, I am really enjoying this story so far and I shall get on to reading the next chapter. :)
xXxMangOxXx chapter 10 . 10/27/2011
Hello :D I just wanted to say that i'm really enjoying this fic and can't wait to read aftermath :} Something i thought you might want to know is that to say germany is japanese is "doitsu" and not "doisu" Hope this helps :]
switsysgrl chapter 18 . 9/27/2011
Dude! Amazin fic.I read it all at once in total fangirl mode. I like how you pair up everyone Android they are actually all ligit couples.

PS. Hungary's frying pan pwns all
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