|Reviews for For Their Love They Never Died|
| lucky chapter 34 . 3/28/2011
beautiful story written by a beautiful author :)
| FallingStar95 chapter 32 . 1/17/2011
This is pretty good! Update soon, please!
| Shana chapter 6 . 5/27/2010
I was reading this and I was enjoying it so much until you yanked me out of the time period. Unfortunately I've lost interest.
| Spazzy Ronni chapter 31 . 4/11/2010
pls pls pls pls pls write more! i wanna find out what happens
| LuckyxLabradoodlexLoverx7 chapter 31 . 3/28/2010
great story so far - update soon.
i'm secretly praying that aida has twins - a boy and a girl. that would b a major plot twist.
looking forward to updates.
aka - Sara
| meh chapter 25 . 11/18/2009
it's starting to go downhill - bring it back
| meh chapter 24 . 11/18/2009
didn't like it - didn't hate it, either - keep going.
| rorygilmore12134 chapter 26 . 9/28/2009
great chapter! can't wait for more!
| met chapter 23 . 9/21/2009
pretty good - can't wait to read more
| LuckyxLabradoodlexLoverx7 chapter 22 . 9/20/2009
thank u for fixing the disclaimer problem - i'm much happier now. i only spotted a few grammar errors, but other than that, it was great.
| rorygilmore12134 chapter 22 . 9/20/2009
awesome chapter! i can't wait til the next one. update soon!
| LuckyxLabradoodlexLoverx7 chapter 21 . 9/19/2009
spelling, grammar and punction errors are the only ones that i found.
THE DISCLAIMER AND THING AT THE BOTTOM NEED TO GO.
| LuckyxLabradoodlexLoverx7 chapter 20 . 9/19/2009
i was having deja vu with this chapter - i felt that you typed it twice. U NEED A BETA-READER!
anyway, keep writing.
| LuckyxLabradoodlexLoverx7 chapter 19 . 9/19/2009
if i were you, i would get a beta-reader - i've volunteered at least 100 times. no offense Laurie, but you really need one.
Again, the disclaimer and the notes at the bottom are getting really old really fast.
the story is good, with the exception with the spelling and grammar mistakes.
| LuckyxLabradoodlexLoverx7 chapter 18 . 9/19/2009
NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO
1) THEY WOULDN'T HAVE MOVIES/ICE CREAM BACK THEN
2) I THOUGHT AIDA WAS AN ONLY CHILD
3) THE LANGUAGE WAS VERY MODERN
4) I WOULD THINK THAT AIDA'S FATHER WOULD HAVE SOME SAY AS TO WHY HIS DAUGHTER WAS GOING TO THE USA - I WOULD THINK HE WOULD TRY TO STOP THEM FROM GOING.
5) ENOUGH WITH THE DISCLAIMER - IT'S GETTING REALLY OLD
6) I SAW AT LEAST 7 SPELLING AND GRAMMAR MISTAKES.