|Reviews for Fever Dreams|
| darth fluffy chapter 12 . 12/17/2013
Light is a metalbender now.
| darth fluffy chapter 2 . 12/17/2013
I have to ask, was this chapter a shout-out to Avatar: The Last Airbender? Because something similar happened to Zuko in the episode "The Earth King". The previous episode, after spending a season and a half chasing the Avatar (the last hope for peace in the world), Zuko finally let his bison go when he had the chance. He then fell ill and spent the next episode knocked out with a high fever, and his uncle said it was caused by the stress of changing his ideals, since it was the first time he'd ever not hurt the heroes.
Though, if I had to pick a character from Avatar who reminded me of Light, I'd probably pick Jet. They both had good ideals, the just took it a little too far.
| Guest chapter 9 . 10/27/2013
At the point where Matsuda was trying to have sex with L, I could feel one of the characters thinking "NOW it gets weird," even though it got weird a long while back.
| Guest chapter 3 . 10/27/2013
/and L would want to keep an eye on him forever/
Surprise, surprise, the high archiver son of a workalcoholic has abandonment issues!
| UchihaNaruTeme4 chapter 34 . 9/21/2013
This story was crazy insane and so beautifully written. It was super intense and thrilling. You had me on the edge of my seat all the way to the end. Bravo :)
| YumiDoesTheMacarena chapter 34 . 4/23/2013
This was so good! Yes, L came across very much as the sort of character who would be horribly, terribly upset and probably take a great deal of time to recover from knowing that Light was Kira... but WOULD recover and wouldn't punish him too badly for it.
But really, just wow. This was SUCH a great story! It was a really amazing ride, mentally and emotionally speaking. I was never quite sure who was going to do what next, and it was a lot of fun to read and guess and wonder.
| YumiDoesTheMacarena chapter 33 . 4/23/2013
I really like you Light, and your L. And, well, the whole story, really. It's crazy-complicated at times, which makes it very believable considering that it is a DEATH NOTE fic.
| YumiDoesTheMacarena chapter 28 . 4/23/2013
This was really well done! I can't wait to see what happens next!
| YumiDoesTheMacarena chapter 14 . 4/22/2013
I am finding myself far more attentive and amused every time the narration mentions Light glancing at Rem because of those cameras! It's really quite entertaining. And wow, L, could you be any more vague?
| YumiDoesTheMacarena chapter 7 . 4/21/2013
Poor Matsuda! I mean, he should probably buck up a little, but at the same time I can totally sympathize with the fellow, because really, who wants to clean up after two of their friends or coworkers have just had sex? Squick.
I did love how you had L just sort of sink down into his usual pose in the shower while he thought things over.
| YumiDoesTheMacarena chapter 6 . 4/21/2013
Oh my god, that was ten kinds of awkward.
| YumiDoesTheMacarena chapter 3 . 4/21/2013
Holy COW that was super, wonderfully complicated. Well done! Also, I appreciate your starting the chapter on a relatively light and straightforward note, with the doctor's perspective, and adored the line "In the end, Dr. Yamane had concluded that he was perhaps dealing with an eccentric, crazy millionaire who was kinky and did not want any normal doctors to see him chained to his boyfriend." It's perfect and hilarious.
| KkChibiChop chapter 34 . 2/20/2013
This is seriously the best DN fic I have ever read! I really appreciated all of the AN's. Especially the first one which convinced me to even start the story in the first place. The an's were really insightful towards your thinking process while writing and quite nice to read. I thought all the characters were really ic and I ultimately enjoyed every twist and turn.
| halfpromise chapter 1 . 1/19/2013
I don't read fanfic very often unless I'm told to by someone (because I'm extremely lazy in that way and afraid of disappointment) and I'm so pleased that I was recommended this story. It's wonderfully dreamlike and beautifully written. The feeling of being resigned to letting something happen and being a little confused and detached from it, is really well done. The chain is always a lovely analogy and I love how you use it here, because you get the sense of continuing suspicion and surety as well as L just wanting Light around. *happy sigh* I'll carry on reading this week and I'm sorry if I spam you with reviews.
| hellawworliet chapter 34 . 11/10/2012
You're amazing author. Sorry, but english is foreign language for me.
Впервые встречаю настолько близкие к канону манги характеры. Вам мое уважение и привет.