Reviews for Collide
ChildOfWisdom chapter 6 . 1/5/2015
I know you know what beautiful story you have written but allow me to compliment you.

I am in tears right now. I believe the last time I cried during a story was when Percy and Annabeth fell to Tartarus but the way I'm crying now is just insane.

This story is beautiful beyond words. It's golden. It's flawless. It's perfect.

You're abilities as a story teller are impeccable and your writing style is just lovely and refreshing.

I cannot tell you how much I love this story, how grateful I am that you have written this and how I will always remember this story. Susan's fate in the books, to me, was not right. I love Susan, she's an amazing character and the fate C.S Lewis gave her, to me, was just completely unfair.

But this story, this fate that you have given her, gives her justice. This is what she needed, this is what SHOULD have happened.

Brilliant, just...absolutely, wholly, brilliant.

Thank you so much for this story and I apologize for the long review. Keep writing forever. I think you've made the entire universe shine brighter because of this story.
rosali sobreira chapter 6 . 1/4/2013
ao mesmo tempo que vc me faz chora, vc me deixa alegre com esse final.
firecrushedcat chapter 6 . 11/4/2011
I love it(: the joyous reunion was so touching. It really pulled at my heart strings(: love it.
LatinaGurl96 chapter 6 . 8/5/2011



this was AMAZING! I'll admit the first few chapters had me a little unsure, but this ending, this last chapter...just...

7Miss7Butterfly7 chapter 6 . 4/26/2011
Brilliant story.

One of the best I have seen here D

Don't stop to write Suspian stories because they are excellent.

Sulocasp327 chapter 6 . 4/12/2011
Awwww! This story was absolutely amazing! I've never read a more beautiful Suspian story! It was very inspiring to read, & I hope you continue to write because you're great at it! :)
A. Lily Potter chapter 5 . 12/21/2010
Fantastic story! You perfectly captured Seraphina, Ramandu's Daughter and made her very brave and sincere though not above just a tint of jealousy. Susan's character was also well developed. It was a beautiful story and sooooooo tragic :)
VoiceOfTime chapter 6 . 11/23/2010
I loved it!
bowlfullofcherries chapter 6 . 11/8/2010
sooooo gooooood. geez. so good.

thanks for the glorious read.
bowlfullofcherries chapter 5 . 11/8/2010
this is so well done. like a picture book whose story unfolds page by page. it's that vivid. that clear and that lovely. thanks for the read.
bowlfullofcherries chapter 4 . 11/8/2010
whew. brave, brave Seraphina.
bowlfullofcherries chapter 3 . 11/8/2010
saaaaad. so sad.

really, very good! thanks for the read.
bowlfullofcherries chapter 1 . 11/8/2010
uhm. premonition?
FelipeMarcusThomas chapter 6 . 7/24/2010
Nicely written.
LadyRin98790 chapter 2 . 7/23/2010
Grrrrrrrrrrrr...stupid star's daughther...I never liked her...I actually stopped right at the end of the Dawn Treader and refused to read the last two books for a week and a half. Anyway, good job though the nd was sad and I had a feeling Aslan would roar
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