|Reviews for The Hunter and the Hunted|
| Serya-chan chapter 1 . 4/8/2010
Whoah ! o.o It's really good, even though I don't really get it " (Am I stupid or my english is so bad ? TT) Did Axel actually shoot his dear Roxas or it's just an illusion ? Maybe the monster just wanted to trick Axel because it wished to kill him more easily 0.0 For me, this one-shot could be a very good multi-chaptered story
| Ciel In A Dress chapter 1 . 11/20/2009
so mysterious... and really cool! Axel's the best. :)
| FinalFallenFantasy chapter 1 . 9/14/2009
Ohnoes... I wonder if it was really him, or just, as he thought, an illusion? Either way it's painful for Axel. I especially love the description of him freefalling; it really feels almost as if you're the one doing it yourself.
| reddoggie chapter 1 . 9/13/2009
creepy. do you think the 'thing' read his heart and tried to find axels weakness hoping that he wouldnt be able to kill his so-called 'beloved' person? woah. long too bad! it didnt work. or maybe, roxas was 'haunting' axel? confusing, but very interesting! thanks for the mysterious fic!QQ
| mei lynn 64 chapter 1 . 9/12/2009
-le gasp- I don't get it. Did Axel just shoot Roxas or somebody who looked like him? What? This is really good but what happened to Roxas?
| Xidori-chan chapter 1 . 9/12/2009
U must write more!X3
| Sad0-masochisticPyro chapter 1 . 9/12/2009
o! this is interesting. i love supernatural things and this is totally up my street
axel is the vanquisher C: that is cool! in a run down town he is the shining knight sort of thing :) evil beings are so evil, taking the form of someone dear to axel,Roxas. i like the description i got some ivid images that i was liking :) nice writing. i look forward to seeing where it goes :D
| PhoenixDash chapter 1 . 9/12/2009
You've done it once again. I'm happy to gotten the oportunity to read another of your wonderful tales of both fantasy, mystery, gore and lot's more. I always get a smile on my lips when I see in the story list that you've posted yet another of your stories.
But it makes me wonder what happened to Roxas? Or have I missed something? I probably have. And I think I tried to read this story atleast three times only to have it say that there is no story with the id "5371451" (or whatever..) And I've had a bad week so it felt great that even more things doesn't want to do what I want them too. (Oh, my bad; it's not my month.. And to think that bad thing happened in September. Take just the 11:th. One year after the twin tower a very important Swedish woman got killed in a mall when she went shopping. She even had two boy that lots their mother because that a guy though he heard "Jesus" or something tell him to kill her. Insanity is never easy. Even I hear voices sometimes, but usually it's only memories for the ones near me. Like when I read a book I could hear my best friend read it for me in my head. But now it's mostly empty. My head I mean..)
Until next time our paths crosses!
I'm sorry if I temperarly killed you with my word-overload. After I had post it up I was like "holy sh*t!" and then I checked how many word it was and yeah, it was 638.. Whoops? I feel very bad about it and to be honest it was the most I've ever written to. Sorry for never be able to stop my ramlings. I hope that I haven't manage to scare you away yet. That would suck..