Reviews for The Pain Is Agony
Butterflies-LastForever chapter 2 . 7/23/2010
aww
holly7tree chapter 1 . 11/12/2009
oh...I love this! so sad so... anguishing! I really like it. Just the thought of Edward not being with bella...it ripps my heart, very painfully. I like it some much. So here is my review. Keep writing no matter what anyone tells you.

~Fate
Belovedninja chapter 1 . 9/17/2009
aw... i love it! really sad!
0041523 chapter 1 . 9/14/2009
Aww, that was so sad It was really good though, I liked it a lot :D
jennayg123 chapter 1 . 9/13/2009
This was so incredibly sad, but I loved it! I feel so bad for Edward :(
Book2romantic chapter 1 . 9/13/2009
For some reason fanfiction wouldn't let me look at this whenever I tried to click on it earlier today.

It was good though.

I do have to wonder if Edward would really ask those questions quite like he did at the end. They didn't feel accusatory enough for me.
my2galspal chapter 1 . 9/12/2009
I think you did an excellent job. It was great and still left me wanting more.

Thanks for sharing your writing. Best of luck in the contest.
cool-pen-name-here chapter 1 . 9/12/2009
this made me cry! i can't believe it...i was on the verge of tears like half way through, and then the last sentence just made me so sad :(

this was so heartbreaking and beautifully written; i really enjoyed it!

poor edward...but what a great entry :)
Darkward - In The Dark chapter 1 . 9/12/2009
Thank you for entering the contest!

Good luck!

Darkward
inatowncalledforks chapter 1 . 9/12/2009
Tears.