awwwwwwwwwww ssoooooooo cuuuuttttttteeeeeeee!

nice story, very original

I like it. :D

Somehow cute, but still- OCs are not very fun to read.

I liked this. A lot. Great work. :D

this is definately worth continuing. although it wouldn't hurt to take it a little slower, and to add some more details, i loved this. please continue,

I like this story. I hope you can update very soon cause I can't wait to see what happens next.

Hm... Perhaps you should make it longer? Your Muse is right; the power of the Muse prohibits you to make it a one-shot!

My criticism of this one-shot is similar to my criticism of Twilight.

He's stalking her, and she's okay with it. She seems kind of spineless. She gets written off because of his emotions. Like Bella/Edward, everything is okay because he loves her.

And how does she know him?

Also, canon note: Aeolus' mention in canon is that he's contained in Hermes' thermos in SoM. So it's technically not very PJO to include him here. Greek myth, I'll buy.

That said? Well written, props on the spelling and grammar, but watch the flowery description and lack of plot.