|Reviews for Jim's father returns|
| Guest chapter 6 . 10/11/2014
As in Skywalker Luke?
| Cac chapter 1 . 8/2/2014
This spelling is atrocious!
| TearsDrippingDown chapter 7 . 7/16/2013
UPDATE SOON PLEASE!
| TearsDrippingDown chapter 5 . 7/16/2013
Do you want me to proof read your chapters before you update?
| Unique Pain chapter 1 . 2/26/2013
I'm not sure what to make of this, all of the punctuation is mixed up and I cant really tell if someone is speaking or not, might come back to it another time
| WolfGirl167 chapter 1 . 10/19/2010
please someone review my story xx
| citgirl chapter 1 . 5/8/2010