|Reviews for Jim's father returns|
| Rosella chapter 1 . 12/8/2015
This has good concept but oh god get someone to proof read this. Right now it's not good at all I'd give it half a star. Please fix this.
| TearsDrippingDown chapter 7 . 7/16/2013
UPDATE SOON PLEASE!
| TearsDrippingDown chapter 5 . 7/16/2013
Do you want me to proof read your chapters before you update?
| Unique Pain chapter 1 . 2/26/2013
I'm not sure what to make of this, all of the punctuation is mixed up and I cant really tell if someone is speaking or not, might come back to it another time
| WolfGirl167 chapter 1 . 10/19/2010
please someone review my story xx
| citgirl chapter 1 . 5/8/2010