|Reviews for The Beginning|
| HeeroWZero chapter 1 . 5/10/2010
Excellent, well written story. I enjoyed the read.
Seemed a bit out of character for Wufei but I could see him letting his guard down under stress. I also thought the latter part of the story moved a little too quickly for how the beginning was set. I would have liked to see a quick break or two in all the dialogue to see some more of their inner thoughts as you did a great job of setting up Wufei at the start.
Overall it was quite good and one of the better short fics I have read. Well done!
| meteordehyde chapter 1 . 4/12/2010
kyah! that was so sweet! i just love wufei-sally fanfics!
| WoofumsPup chapter 1 . 3/8/2010
So sweet and cute~ Love every bit of it. I've read this story before but I have always forgotten to review. It was a very lovely story. Hope you right more~
| Devil Rebel chapter 1 . 9/16/2009