Reviews for It's Your Job
Spiders Wearing Tiny Hats chapter 1 . 1/21/2010
Yay, another Sahara/Kaiji writer! _ I really enjoyed this story and the little interjection about Warrick, since I'm a CSI dork as well. (I'm not sure if CSI existed yet in the Kaiji time period, but it was still a really funny joke.) I think you characterized them well and I liked your descriptions, especially the interaction between Sahara and Kaiji and how Sahara is both a helper and an annoyance. There were a few errors here and there, like the wrong punctuation for speaking (it's almost always comma, then quotation, and then he said or anything along those lines). You had one spelling mistake with "through" (it should be "threw") but otherwise there weren't any. I liked how you wrote Kaiji a lot; his swearing and sarcastic humor were especially nice touches. The only problem I had with your writing of him was the use of seme/uke. I don't think he'd know these terms, and even then, I'm not sure he'd apply them to his relationship with Sahara. You have good flow and you get humor down really well. This was a really enjoyable story; I hope you write more in the future! :D
EmilyFitch8D chapter 1 . 9/15/2009
This is one great/funny story ! :D

i couldn't stop giggling at the CSI bit ;P

cheered me up lots and that pairing?

so cuute ! x3

write more chapters please! :)