Reviews for The Enemy Within
cmpdred chapter 1 . 11/8/2009
This was a fun one-shot. Any chance its status will change? I would love to see more, especially if Jasper discovers the four-leaf clover tattoo...
mssmith chapter 1 . 10/14/2009
Wow...this was a pretty intense one-shot. I love all things Jasper and I would love to see you continue this story. It seems like a story that could possibly go on for at least a few more chapters. Thank you for your story and for your love of Jasper.
abcdefedcba chapter 1 . 10/14/2009
Lol, really enjoyed it, though I would have liked to read more, it would make a great story.

JazzygirlCullen chapter 1 . 10/2/2009
Oh! Please don't leave us hanging here! ) I would love you forever if you continued this )
redsnapdragon chapter 1 . 9/27/2009
Really cool oneshot. You've left me wanting more. Any chance of continuing the story after the contest?
OdeFromParis chapter 1 . 9/24/2009
that was a great story, i hope you will do a continuation rapidly! i'm waiting impatiently, good job!
halconmia chapter 1 . 9/20/2009
Wow I really hope you guys continue this story it really sounds like an intresting plot line.
patch138 chapter 1 . 9/17/2009
i wouldnt have let him leave!

alec's girl chapter 1 . 9/17/2009
can u please contnue this

i swear i will review every chp.

i love jasper and alice nad there arent mant stories about them.

plz? i want more :)
tammyjs chapter 1 . 9/14/2009
But I want more! Are you going to write more chapters?
Jolinar-nrw chapter 1 . 9/14/2009
WooWOO! *WolfWhistles*

Amazing chapter
anonymous chapter 1 . 9/13/2009
wow! what a great plot line! I can't wait for the next chapter! Please update soon!
susayq chapter 1 . 9/13/2009
oh! This was great! I can see you making this a full story...hint, hint ;0)

contygoldbarg chapter 1 . 9/13/2009
first you should totally continue this!

very well writen and a very good idea!

love it!