|Reviews for The Enemy Within|
| cmpdred chapter 1 . 11/8/2009
This was a fun one-shot. Any chance its status will change? I would love to see more, especially if Jasper discovers the four-leaf clover tattoo...
| mssmith chapter 1 . 10/14/2009
Wow...this was a pretty intense one-shot. I love all things Jasper and I would love to see you continue this story. It seems like a story that could possibly go on for at least a few more chapters. Thank you for your story and for your love of Jasper.
| abcdefedcba chapter 1 . 10/14/2009
Lol, really enjoyed it, though I would have liked to read more, it would make a great story.
| JazzygirlCullen chapter 1 . 10/2/2009
Oh! Please don't leave us hanging here! ) I would love you forever if you continued this )
| redsnapdragon chapter 1 . 9/27/2009
Really cool oneshot. You've left me wanting more. Any chance of continuing the story after the contest?
| OdeFromParis chapter 1 . 9/24/2009
that was a great story, i hope you will do a continuation rapidly! i'm waiting impatiently, good job!
| halconmia chapter 1 . 9/20/2009
Wow I really hope you guys continue this story it really sounds like an intresting plot line.
| patch138 chapter 1 . 9/17/2009
i wouldnt have let him leave!
| alec's girl chapter 1 . 9/17/2009
can u please contnue this
i swear i will review every chp.
i love jasper and alice nad there arent mant stories about them.
plz? i want more :)
| tammyjs chapter 1 . 9/14/2009
But I want more! Are you going to write more chapters?
| Jolinar-nrw chapter 1 . 9/14/2009
| anonymous chapter 1 . 9/13/2009
wow! what a great plot line! I can't wait for the next chapter! Please update soon!
| susayq chapter 1 . 9/13/2009
oh! This was great! I can see you making this a full story...hint, hint ;0)
| contygoldbarg chapter 1 . 9/13/2009
first you should totally continue this!
very well writen and a very good idea!