|Reviews for Tiger's Mask|
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/7/2012
O_O that is sooo sad memeph *teary eyes*
| Eldr-Fire chapter 1 . 3/13/2010
Ooh, very intriguing! I like this and your other Kushina one. I had never REALLY considered the possibility of her still being alive. I mean, it's always floating around in the back of the mind, but I had never encountered any manifestations of the idea before. Yours are very good.
| TNKnight chapter 1 . 9/26/2009
got your message
sorry if my review sounded harsh
now, since you mention that you are such an a* i'll not hole back
with the way you wrote in the drabble
the drabble itself is fail in its own way, because like i said the things in there are totally out of ordinary to happen form the human's point of view, hope you understand what i means, and since this is ninja world, it is my believe that majority's opinions do not count, and i think that kishi's fire council is just an pathetic excuse he pulled out of his ass just to continue the story and the events of which i believe will never happen in the real ninja world
and about being ooc, as long as it is a fanfic everything is ooc, nothing is original
the only matter is whether they are enjoyable to read or not, what i mean is even the total ass-hole characters can be fun to read, you know
and from you dribble majority of the characters in you story will be acting in a way that is not enjoyable
which is why i said that. it fail
even if you do not care about the readers and write the way you want with the story, if what the elements from the drabble indicate are true, the fic will not be a hit
the thing is, because you said you have total work behind this
i don't like see another failure fic with promising ideas
i've seen fic with over 100k to 200k words and with a single digit reviews or none at all
it's destrubing to see those fics as a fellow fiction member
i just don't want your fic to go down the same lane, if you're putting a lot of efforts into this fic
i wish you best of luck with your ideas
| The Blazing Fire chapter 1 . 9/17/2009
I think a sequel or a multi-chaptered fic would be nice.
| TNKnight chapter 1 . 9/13/2009
there's only one thing i want to say here
i'll not say it's out of characters, because it is your story and yours to write :)
but i'm still seeing some out of ordinary things
i know what you are trying to imply here
so my questions is that, is sarutobi and other ninjas like the jiraiya of senin and clan heads like ino-shika-cho and some high ranked anbus who i'm certain that will not biased are stupid enough to let this thing you described happen?
i do not think so, no matter how much power the council or the ones who make the event happen, you write in this story, hold, they are nothing against the god of shinobi and the village can be run without the council, if i have to say
sure it'll be difficult but not that difficult, might even be easier without them lol, merchants can be replaced anytime, as well as the administrative team
so, it is my believe that sarutobi is not that kinda of stupid old geezer to let the council or the villagers to push him around
what i'm trying to say here is, if you truly believe what you wrote in this fic is a possible event, you need not to continue like you said you intent to
because your ideas and this fic already failed
| Ageant chapter 1 . 9/12/2009
Hey! Really liked this short drabble as it were! I enjoyed how you hinted at a deeper meaning and her hesitance at looking out of Naruto out of ear of what road it'd lead down. Overall pretty awesome!
| JayceeRising chapter 1 . 9/12/2009
Just a maskless ANBU... That's sad.