Reviews for A Few Days Continued, Time in the Triangle 20
edge15684 chapter 15 . 10/20/2009
wow I love Bizzie. She's smart for her age. I can't wait to see them in Vegas.
calicsifan07 chapter 14 . 10/18/2009
That was some hot smut. Good thing I went to church today. HEHE thanks for sharing. Grissom certainly took the time to make Sara special. We could all use someone like that.
Billyjorja chapter 14 . 10/18/2009
Lovely bit of smut, so glad they found sometime for themselves.

hammer78 chapter 14 . 10/18/2009
I could just see Grissom running around wearing the kids out lol

Thanks for the smut, I look forward to the next update :)
DoctorWhoArrow chapter 14 . 10/17/2009
great job. keep up the good work
Nonnie88 chapter 14 . 10/17/2009

Thanks for that! Ive been writing SMUT all night haha...

Im the process of writing another story (with SMUT) haha...

Awesome chapter... very sweet...

Honor x
gsrfan34 chapter 14 . 10/17/2009
Very beautiful and sweet chapter.
toothchick chapter 14 . 10/17/2009
So beautiful & loving!
edge15684 chapter 14 . 10/17/2009
I loved it. It was romantic and I wish I had a guy like that.
toothchick chapter 13 . 10/17/2009
Great family chapter! I just melted at Gil's words to Sara!
ILoveJorja chapter 12 . 10/16/2009
Lovely chapter.
tccon chapter 13 . 10/16/2009
I have been busy so I have just had a chance to read this story . . . . I really love how you have developed these characters. I can see the kids as clear as day, Will's blond curly hair, Eli's green eyes. Loved when the twins refused to dress up as bugs for Halloween! This adventure out east has brought them together as a family as well expanding Sara's independence into her work. Thanks for continuing your writing this story line.
lyn in mi chapter 13 . 10/16/2009
sorry i have not reviewed, i was able to catch up with your story, as always i enjoy your stories more than any other writer's. being older i have seen men and women change their lives this way. please keep up the great work. i felt the new season is still flat in their writing, it's great to see sara back but only if they keep her and grissom together .can't wait for more chapters and stories.
hammer78 chapter 13 . 10/16/2009
I had to lol when Will came into the bathroom, Kids always have perfect timing. Keep up the good work :)
mcsip3 chapter 13 . 10/16/2009
Great chapter. Great story. Love the Family at the beach. Just gives you a warm fizzy. Thanks for writing.
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