Reviews for A Few Days Continued, Time in the Triangle 20
sillym3 chapter 20 . 11/4/2009
I was three to four chapters behind and I was glad to be able to catch up. The green eyed little monsters part was hillarious. Go Bizzy Go! LOL
Gilbertgal7 chapter 20 . 11/4/2009
Great chapter. Glad to have a chapter that's just them. Hopefully, this was part 1 of 2 with them alone. I have to admit I am looking forward to the remodel of the house.

Billyjorja chapter 20 . 11/4/2009
Know how they feel, must be lovely to be alone for a while.
toothchick chapter 19 . 11/3/2009
Somehow I read the next chapter before this one...

I knew it was Heather! I love how the girls were protective of their parents-so cute!
Spratjmk chapter 20 . 11/3/2009
That was good
toothchick chapter 20 . 11/3/2009
This was breathtakingly beautiful!
gsrfan34 chapter 20 . 11/3/2009
Great chapter and very sweet smut!
mcsip3 chapter 20 . 11/3/2009
Yeah another update. As always agreat story. Love the interaction of the whole gang in the last chapter especially Bizzy. The protection of Sara and Grissom by the kids was precious. And love the smut in this chapter. Good to hear ther will be at least 4 more to come.
hammer78 chapter 20 . 11/3/2009
Thanks for that great little smutty chapter. I can't believe we only have 4-5 chapters left keep up the great work :)
edge15684 chapter 20 . 11/3/2009
it was very well done
calicsifan07 chapter 20 . 11/3/2009
OK that was an awesome chapter. Thanks for letting the young one out of her cage for a time. I can't wait for more. I have this overwhelimg urge to go swimming now in warm water. Hehehehe. More soom please!
hammer78 chapter 19 . 11/3/2009
I loved the way you wrote about how the kids acted around Heather lol.

24hrs with no kids let the good times roll, what fun they are gonna have.

I loom forward to the next update.
gsrfan34 chapter 19 . 11/3/2009
Great chapter!
Spratjmk chapter 19 . 11/3/2009
Great chapter
calicsifan07 chapter 19 . 11/3/2009
WHAT? no smut after all that. I was laughing about the reaction of the children also. That was funny. Bizzy is a smart one for sure. There better be smut in the next one.
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