Reviews for The Unexpected
KazaHaru45 chapter 1 . 3/14
This is not a flame, I assure you. Your story has a good start but what really got to me was the grammatical errors. You can touch up your English skills by reading dictionaries to get the hang of the spellings and pronunciation.
Silver Shenron chapter 5 . 2/25
more please include the birth
BooBoo1995 chapter 5 . 4/23/2016
it sounds like a good story
Guest chapter 5 . 7/18/2015
Awesome love it...
Guestnekosback chapter 2 . 1/3/2014
Please please please pleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleaseplease! Updaaaaaaaattttttteeeeee! I'm BEGGING you! This was sooooooo good and to see it not updated... Brings tears to my eyes...
kat1316 chapter 5 . 12/17/2013
update
Guestnekosback chapter 5 . 8/15/2013
Pleaaaaeeeeesssseeee update! I love this story! I'm hooked!
saranya1555 chapter 5 . 5/21/2013
Hi, it is good fic continuation please
Padfootette chapter 5 . 4/18/2013
please update this story soon it is such a great story and will edward be comming back to harry and will harry tell him he is pregnant.
Mashkai30 chapter 5 . 4/1/2013
Lovely story! I like it thus far and am looking forward to more. Thanks for sharing!
blackbloodywolf chapter 5 . 1/3/2013
this is actually really good! please continue
Alex chapter 5 . 12/17/2012
Nice story, pleas pleas continue.
Der Puppenmacher chapter 5 . 11/13/2012
he became friends with malfoy way too fast...
Der Puppenmacher chapter 4 . 11/13/2012
hopefully harry will run away
should bumblebee take care of his own messes
Der Puppenmacher chapter 3 . 11/13/2012
i was really hoping he would be kidnapped so he can escape the wizardig world
dumblesore and voldywart should just go and off each other
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