Reviews for Naruto's Journey
Jameslw chapter 8 . 11/10/2014
great please continue
102031 chapter 8 . 12/13/2012
I like the story, aside from the lot of grammer mistakes.
Lyondavid91 chapter 9 . 11/10/2012
i hope you work on this story again i love it
naruto chapter 9 . 9/12/2012
Continue the damn story,plz...
Kjgamer37 chapter 5 . 7/20/2012
Sorry email me at thenewkjb yahoo com
Kjgamer37 chapter 5 . 7/20/2012
Hey I was wondering what ever happened to pile of lemons haha I really enjoyed it but never got to finish it could you email me at :)
PS. I'm a big fan of your work
Anon chapter 7 . 7/8/2012
I think that u should have made naruto completely innocent to his situation and had all this going on behind his back without him realizing it that would have made this much more interesting like when he was asked if he had a girlfreind he it would have been way better if he was all innocent and stuff then we would feel actual competition between all the girls cuz their is sort of a dominant girl here and that way with naruto being innocent like it would feel closer to the real thing
mr. cloud chapter 9 . 6/6/2012
U can add me to that list
Mr. cloud chapter 8 . 6/6/2012
I liked the story and hope u update soon and I would rather it be just a naruhina story with Sakura interfering
Anulmentor chapter 9 . 6/5/2012
you can add me to the list too
spiritwolf35 chapter 9 . 6/4/2012
I do have a question and that is why post all this on this chapter when you hardly never update it and you update the other stories more so you should have posted this junk on them than getting my hopes up that YOU FINALLY DECIDED TO ACTUALLY UPDATE THIS STORY JUST TO FIND THIS JUNK heck I stopped reading Pile of Lemons after the first couple of chapters as for the other I never even bother reading that story since I am not big into Tayuya but oh well
Wolfone10 chapter 8 . 4/12/2012
Well.. Some spelling mistakes.. but I won't harp on those.. my first few chapters were... HORRIBLE spelling train-wrecks.. and I LIKE inner-hinata... It's ALWAYS the quiet ones!... I think this should be a NaruxHinaxSakura fic personally... Those two REALLY do love him.. So it's only fitting... He's fought HARD had a rough life and is the jailor of a demon... So what if he doesn't have a CONVENTIONAL relationship.. "If a mirror is broken you must have many pieces to see the reflection"... Now you need a chapter where he bangs pinky... What did the letters from his parents say? Did he even read them yet? Or did the dumb-ass forget about them?
D chapter 8 . 3/20/2012
i really like your stories and about that whole who naruto is going to marry i think it should be hinata
Guest chapter 3 . 3/18/2012
The chapters are too short
honorwolf1 chapter 7 . 6/23/2011
this is quite interesting
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