|Reviews for Triquetra|
| Jen chapter 18 . 8/13
| Lzay-Niight chapter 10 . 1/28
Um, no. I completely do not agree with some the previous reviews. Severus was NOT out of line. No were CLOSE to it in my opinion.
Most insist that Harry being insecure (Because of his poor abused past) isn't surprising, and that Severus should have cuddled him for ignoring his two lovers who had tried to contact him safely repeatedly over the course of a week, instead of put his foot down and draw a line to prevent making a potentially dangerous situation even worse.
It does not help matter that Harry still does not get the danger of the situation, and that it revolves around him.
Honestly, he needs to grow the heck up. Gain some maturity points before he drags both of the people he 'loves' down because of his self-centeredness.
| Lzay-Niight chapter 9 . 1/27
Oh, another Harry is so insecure that all it takes is a little coaxing for him to fill out of the loop of a threesome story. Then cue the woe-me-Harry-Potter-angst. Until Draco and Severus swoop in too coo nonsense at him for however long it takes for him to actually THINK.
I guess Harry conveniently forgot that Draco and Severus are risking much, MUCH more continuing this relationship then he is. And if it is brought to light all Harry has to do is deny it, and Severus and Draco could be accused of rape and thrown in jail.
But of course NOT.
No. Harry is only concerned about Harry. And how everyone is not thinking exactly like him.
| SaphhirreMoon chapter 1 . 11/23/2014
Usually I don't like reading authors descriptions at the beginning, but yours was humorously enjoyable!
| BlackProdigy chapter 18 . 10/15/2014
Absolutely amazing story with a dignified even if slightly cliche ending.
| Thebluntfultruth chapter 18 . 8/15/2014
I have several issues with this story.
1) Harry has both the Mauraders Map and the Invisibility Cloak. Why didn't he just use those to sneak around, especially in the beginning?
2) It was so bleeding obvious who the blackmailer was. I was extremely disappointed at how easy it was to figure it out. It would have been a great twist if it had been some random, little known character, like Marietta Edgecombe.
3) How intense Draco's Veela allure and other abilities were. He seemed like a full blooded Veela, not someone who was just 1/8th a Veela.
4) Someone else mentioned this, but Harry's quick forgiveness of the blackmailer. I'm sorry, but no. It wasn't in character enough for me.
5) How feminine Draco comes across. All the crying and chocolate eating... And the natural lube. What happens if Draco is horny and needs to crap? Just write a female!Draco next time. I came here to read slash not slash with a hint of femininity. I'd read het if I wanted that.
6) St Mungo's hospital is a WIZARDING hospital. So why were there Muggle things like plastic and vending machines for coffee?
Yes, I read the author's note. Yes, I realise this was meant to just be a PWP or porn with a little, barely there plot. That's all that was good about this story. Everything else was just annoying details to make this story have a little support to hold up the sheer crackish feeling this fanfic gave. Next time, don't bother even trying to give a rhyme or reason to the sexy times, or a bit of drama. Stick with oneshots of porn and stop pretending otherwise.
| Guest chapter 18 . 8/4/2014
I know its been a few years since you wrote this but it still made me cry, in a very good way. I don't normally reveiw but this story needed its praises. Very well written. Keep writing
A writer in progress
| onecelestialbeing chapter 4 . 2/15/2014
this story is the best thing ever
| sarahsezlove chapter 18 . 2/14/2014
Wonderful. Wonderful. Wonderful.
| Anna Y. K chapter 18 . 1/7/2014
Wow... This fic is just totally awesome..
I cant believe you! It's a masterpiece!
God.. I really freaked out with Harry for the first three letters...
Especially the third one and Harry's little... doubts? misunderstanding?
Man.. all the angsy was killing me!
I read everything... its 2:47 am! I couldn't even stop to sleep!
I reaply thank you for your amazing fic.
Just like you I love Harry/Snape, I enjoy Draco/Harry, always had a thing for Draco/Snape.. and all of them together? It must be my birthday!
I am so gonna read it again...
I really loved Harry thinking that his lovers only love each other... and Severus telling him otherwise..
All I can say is that your a genious and I really LOVE you and this fic...
Thank you SOOOOOOO MUCH!
p.s. the culprit being Hermione was kindda obvious, but it didnt spoil the fun... You really did a good job
| Toothless-Grin chapter 18 . 8/28/2013
Seeing as this is a fairly old fanfic, I almost made the mistake of hoarding every bit of the wonderful experience tha this fic has given me. However, I noticed that your profile was updated fairly recently, so there might be a chance that my praise will get to you. I was shocked and happy that I had found a Drapery fic that I had not read; they're so rare, but so delicious. It took me a chapter or two to get warmed up to your writing, but may I say, the way you wrote Severus made me fall in love completely with this fic. I enjoyed every moment you allowed us to see what makes him tick. He was complex, sexy, but vulnerable in his own right, and I believed in him. Not to say that the other characters were not convincing, but that with Severus you excelled, and I do not believe any amount of words can truly express how happy I was to see him in such a deserving light,
I think it goes without saying that the smut was beyond good. The Drarry moments were sensual and a pleasure to read, and then all of them together, postively sinful, a relationship to be envious of. Usually I find copious amounts of sex in fanfics frustrating, and a few chapters in pegged this as somewhat of a PWP. But then shit hit the fan and I have never been more glad to be wrong in my life! A story with great sex and a heartbreaking story? So hard to find. A gem among mere stones. I loved every minute and was sad to see the end.
You sir, are a brilliant storyteller, and I am inexplicably glad to have read your work. Thank you for sharing your art.
| viennaaa chapter 4 . 7/15/2013
Yeah soo.. I'm on chapter 4 and I feel that you should change the summery!
I really thought it was vage and it didn't seem so interesting.. And then the enormous warning.. I almost stopped reading again.. But this story.. I'm laughing my ass off!
Really.. The way you wrote snape the first chapters.. Amazing.. Still true to snape.. Not ooc but he gets forced to do things because of the situation and then what he says...
| jo chapter 18 . 5/28/2013
| valre chapter 18 . 5/12/2013
Triquetra is just beautiful.
Funny enough, I've had great background music playing through the whole fic. Coincidence? Maybe, possibly.
I almost died plenty of times throughout the fic, haha.
Veela-Draco is too adorable. Love him to pieces. Aww our little sexual-deviants make me so happy.
| Guest in Europe chapter 18 . 4/25/2013
Hot, hilarious and cute... all at the same time. Thank you. I did spot the stalker quite early on but nevertheless enjoyed the journey. Really liked Ron's grown up reaction.