|Reviews for Private Investigations|
| Susan M. M chapter 10 . 3/23
This is definitely one of your better stories, and the only reason I didn't review any of the chapters is because I refused to permit even the slightest delay in getting to the next chapter. Very plausible, very realistic. Xander may have appreciated the strength of Fleur's heart the most; I appreciated your emphasis on Fleur's brains. Well done. (I'll come back and review properly later, I promise.)
| loretta537 chapter 10 . 10/1/2015
this was a good story, although i wish you had written more about what happened between the end of the last chapter and the epilouge
| jinnxxy chapter 10 . 5/16/2015
Great story, really enjoyed it.
| Tarix chapter 10 . 4/13/2015
A great crossover story and a nice romance between Xander and Fleur. The ending was a bit intense, but still good.
| MrBookworm85 chapter 10 . 12/23/2013
I don't usually say much. My only thought is: "d'oh!" Of course Xander would run into and be hopelessly in love with a part Veela...Great job!
| dogbertcarroll chapter 10 . 12/9/2012
| GeorgeTobor chapter 10 . 8/9/2012
Very nice story. I'd rate it a 10 on TTH.
You should label it complete.
| GeorgeTobor chapter 9 . 8/9/2012
Four stripped of magic, it is a start, but justice would mean more like 400 or 4000 or more losing magic.
Obliviate should be an Unforgivable. We are our memories. Mind Rape is something worth killing over.
| GeorgeTobor chapter 7 . 8/9/2012
And the sheer stupidity of the wizarding world is shown again.
I'd just kill all the wizards, most will just go to hell anyway.
| GeorgeTobor chapter 3 . 8/9/2012
The attitude of the wizarding world towards others is reason enough to strip them of their magic. Dark Willow looks very Light compared to them.
| Vidicon666 chapter 1 . 8/6/2011
A sad ending, but the twist is not unexpected. After all the wizrding world is conservative and xenophobic. Well written and conceived. Thank you.
| gaul1 chapter 10 . 11/23/2009
good chapter, and story, hopes you will fill in the holes, keep up the good work, byes
| Z chapter 10 . 11/20/2009
put it as complete rather than leaving it as it is. It lets other know it's a completed story so they can search for it this way. but good job on this. _
| Firehedgehog chapter 10 . 11/12/2009
| Firehedgehog chapter 9 . 11/8/2009