|Reviews for Private Investigations|
| MrBookworm85 chapter 10 . 12/23/2013
I don't usually say much. My only thought is: "d'oh!" Of course Xander would run into and be hopelessly in love with a part Veela...Great job!
| dogbertcarroll chapter 10 . 12/9/2012
| GeorgeTobor chapter 10 . 8/9/2012
Very nice story. I'd rate it a 10 on TTH.
You should label it complete.
| GeorgeTobor chapter 9 . 8/9/2012
Four stripped of magic, it is a start, but justice would mean more like 400 or 4000 or more losing magic.
Obliviate should be an Unforgivable. We are our memories. Mind Rape is something worth killing over.
| GeorgeTobor chapter 7 . 8/9/2012
And the sheer stupidity of the wizarding world is shown again.
I'd just kill all the wizards, most will just go to hell anyway.
| GeorgeTobor chapter 3 . 8/9/2012
The attitude of the wizarding world towards others is reason enough to strip them of their magic. Dark Willow looks very Light compared to them.
| Vidicon666 chapter 1 . 8/6/2011
A sad ending, but the twist is not unexpected. After all the wizrding world is conservative and xenophobic. Well written and conceived. Thank you.
| gaul1 chapter 10 . 11/23/2009
good chapter, and story, hopes you will fill in the holes, keep up the good work, byes
| Z chapter 10 . 11/20/2009
put it as complete rather than leaving it as it is. It lets other know it's a completed story so they can search for it this way. but good job on this. _
| Firehedgehog chapter 10 . 11/12/2009
| Firehedgehog chapter 9 . 11/8/2009
| Thenchick chapter 9 . 11/6/2009
| Bobboky chapter 9 . 11/6/2009
| piecesofyourheart chapter 8 . 10/29/2009
Okay, I'm not a big fan of Xander, never have and I don't think I will ever be. His timely jokes are great, but I'm not a great fan. I was once a fan of het fiction when I first came on the fan- fiction scene, and then that feeling went bye- bye. But I am a fan of Fleur, and I always love a good fic. THis shaping up to be a really good one. I might not like het pairings but I really like your fic.
| iscariot chapter 8 . 10/29/2009
While I am devastated at your failure to carry on our conversation [not that it actually constituted such]...
Good chapter - albeit I found your description of the combat a tad undeveloped and, whilst not incoherent, lacked a clarity that engendered an overwhelming sense of the perfunctory.
For the love of mike, BTW: it's PIQUED not peaked...sorry, pet hate.
Nice Faith/Harry exchange - I liked the resonance.