Reviews for A Lapse in Judgment
Twinchy chapter 1 . 2/2/2010
LOL, that was great! (plus, I really love John-fics, just in case you were wondering, hehe)
smartassmusicjunkie94 chapter 1 . 10/7/2009
Haha! That made me laugh! Lol!
Mad Server chapter 1 . 9/14/2009
Wow, no Sam and Dean! Points for originality. And for Mary laying into John about reporting on the car's health rather than his own. And for "Christo I'm good!" :)
Tribble Master chapter 1 . 9/13/2009
lol. very orignal and awesome. WRITE ON!
TheFreshApple chapter 1 . 9/13/2009
He. Would. OMG, yes!
CiZiwejes chapter 1 . 9/13/2009
Hahaha! Nice going Mary! Mocking John, just a scratch..yeah, right! Good job! Like the way you play with the words. Awesomely written!
bhoney chapter 1 . 9/13/2009
ROTFL Love this: "“Not a scratch, honey.”

The sudden, frigid silence confuses him. “Mary?”

“John Winchester, are you talking about the car?”" LOL Typical. I love the chance to glimpse John and Mary's relationship before everything went so wrong. Nice job!
Swellison chapter 1 . 9/13/2009
Oh, I liked this, a throwback to John and Mary, before the Fire. Mary comes across great, feisty, worried and irritated at her idiotically heroic husband.

Noninone chapter 1 . 9/13/2009
Dude, Hilarious!

Freakin John, talkin about the car.

Now we know where Dean got that.



Yohko B.