|Reviews for Soft Silence|
| RandomNumbers523156 chapter 1 . 2/20/2014
I liked because it's rare to see Shiki's PoV. I like that she's calm and trying to deal with someone as problematic as Neku (granted he got better in the end). But, good work!
| Ectis chapter 1 . 11/1/2012
That is too cute. Congratulations, you have the distinct honor of being the first TWEWY fic to arrive in my favorites.
| XxxAnimeWolfxxX chapter 1 . 8/11/2012
Loved it! I always liked this pairing way more than Neku/Joshua. That pairing just doesn't even work, in my opinion. :/
| Amulet Misty chapter 1 . 6/26/2012
I loved this fic. Well-written and totally adorable x3 That's just so Neku x33 This is like my new OTP x3
| Hero'sValor132 chapter 1 . 5/14/2011
Good story, you created a good atmosphere and i can totally see neku doing this some time after the story
| madbutterfly chapter 1 . 4/30/2010
That was a very good way to get myself started on reading TWEWY fics again (as I haven't read any in like a year).
It was really cute but still in character so that was great...
| Purple-Pavlova chapter 1 . 2/15/2010
This is legedary!
U captured them so well!
Luv it and faving it!
| Prodigy Keyblade Wielder chapter 1 . 11/27/2009
I LOVE this story. Everything is so intact and in character!
Please write another one soon. :D
| hintcoin chapter 1 . 10/31/2009
awwh, this is so fluffy! ahaha, i wish i could tell you more, but i just can't :
| patleon909 chapter 1 . 10/25/2009
Cute! And really nice! The emotion was definitely there. Many, many thumbs up D
| James Firebrand chapter 1 . 9/24/2009
Heh, NICE. So you finally got around to a JxS huh? And I know EXACTLY what you mean about confessing your feelings to someone being harder than it should. God knows I've gone through that myself WAY too many times...
| Lost Legendaerie chapter 1 . 9/19/2009
GUH. Your stories always make my eyes water, though emotion or just sweeping me along in the story so much that I forget to blink.
xD GLEFUL SARO. There. Is not. Enough. NxS. MOARS.
| Midnight Critic chapter 1 . 9/18/2009
As Westley says, "As you wish."
You know, it's been quite a while since I've read anything good with this pairing. Your choice to have this motif of the pittering of the rain run throughout the story is probably this story's greatest strength. I can definitely see an event like this transpiring between the characters, and the way that you have our couple interact is wonderfully characteristic of their personalities, even after the game.
Like the last fic of yours I reviewed, I do have to say that your words leave a lot to the imagination-I see the characters, but the detailed setting seems to be missing. Even so, the main storyline flows through very well-so in a sense, the lack of scenery is perfectly okay. I still think that you could stand to develop the setting a bit more, as it is another angle for you to develop the characters' emotions as well as their actions to come in the plot. For instance, when you have Shiki flashing back to when she was almost offed, developing that opens a great new design space-a veritable plain for Shiki to mull over her emotions and see if she it has rattled her faith in him.
Again, that's just what I saw-but otherwise, I was quite impressed with your work. Should you decide to continue this, good luck-it'd be something that would be looked forward to. Cheers.
| Hmm chapter 1 . 9/17/2009
It's rly good. But I think you could make it a bit more "romantic"
| Smash Genesis chapter 1 . 9/16/2009
Finally, some Neku x Shiki fanfictions... Joshua x Neku makes no sense!
Beautifully done - I love it!