|Reviews for Miss de Bourgh in Bath|
| Guest chapter 18 . 2/12
For me, this fanfic is a classic! It's perfect in every sense. First, thank you so much for giving voice to Anne, a secondary chatacter that's usually ignored even by P&P fans. Jane Austen's usual structure has become for me a genre in itself and I am always disappointed if one of the next points are missing:
- The Heroine feeling indifference or even resentment towards the Hero when they meet. (The mystery of thinking: Who will be the hero?)
- A Heroine that's wrong in her beliefs and assumptions but grows up and learns.
- A hero who's human and makes mistakes.
- The moment when the heroine realizes she loves the hero - and feels like she has lost him or he is out of her reach.
And your fanfic has every one of these points. The pace is simply great and it never bores! I have grown tired of reading about Elizabeth and Darcy, although I love them, and I wish there were more authors like you who create stories with the JA structure but some original or secobdary characters! Thank you for sharing!
| LadyDisdain2014 chapter 18 . 7/1/2017
This was charming. I thoroughly enjoyed it. It was a lovely surprise to stumble upon, especially since the tone of the writing was so spot on.
| Boingy chapter 18 . 4/16/2017
This story is amazing, thank you so much for posting it! I can't wait to read more of your work!
| CornflakesAtMidnight chapter 18 . 3/5/2017
I loved this story so much! I happened across the Miss Bennet's and enjoyed it so much that I decided that, schoolwork or no schoolwork, I had to read Miss de Bourgh. And I definitely don't regret it! It's so beautifully written; generally when I'm reading I tend to unconsciously skip long paragraphs of description but Miss de Bourgh was so engaging I found myself reading every single word. Well done for holding my unreliable attention!
I loved too how Anne grew and developed in this story, and Theo was utterly charming and witty, no matter what Lady Catherine might say to contradict me.
I'm already looking forward to reading the story again!
| raindude chapter 18 . 1/10/2017
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| KashyaCharsi chapter 1 . 1/2/2017
You writing she should be powerful reminds me of Cosby's daughter saying they are rich. Her dad answered "no, your mother and I are rich. You have nothing." Unless Anne is a self-made woman, her mother is the powerful one, she herself has no more influence that an average serf.
| pennytree chapter 18 . 11/27/2016
I devoured this story and now find myself starting the final chapter and needing to pause. One, because I really need to sleep as it is five in the morning and my brain is throbbing from staying up all night reading this and probably I need to surrender to at least an hour of sleep. Two, because I really want to savor the final chapter to this marvelous, splendid, authentic world of yours. And three, to thank you for sharing your boundless talent with us for free. Please, please, please consider publishing this story professionally because I for one will be happy to fork over money to own it in tangible book form, so its pages can get dog-eared from wear over years and years of re-reads. You are that good.
| ebdarcy.qt4good chapter 12 . 10/29/2016
I read the sequels first and then came to this one. Good work! :) I really enjoy your writing.
| fernandfeather chapter 18 . 5/30/2016
I love this story. I'm so happy Anne got character development and a happy ending. Your writing style flowed really well and I really like how the story unfolded.
| HT chapter 18 . 5/25/2016
Loved it. Really wonderful story!
| hilaro chapter 18 . 10/16/2015
Having good read this several times I must say how good it is. The people are real and the way Anne grows emotionally is very well written.
| Ansku chapter 18 . 9/4/2015
| loriinor chapter 17 . 8/31/2015
What a treat this was to read! A lovely story, beautifully written - it has inspired my first review. (I'm so glad I came to it late, for I don't know if I could have lived with the suspense of having to wait for new chapters.) Now I'm off to find your other stories!
| Diamond and Stars chapter 17 . 7/5/2015
It's been 5 years since I've first read this story, but for some reason, my mind thought of this specific story! So here I am, reading all 18 chapters in one sitting. This story is still as elegant and wonderfully written since I first read it. I know you're not expecting a review from this story, but this has a special place in my heart and I love re-reading it. So thank you for writing such a beautiful, emotional and riveting piece. This story is so much more...I just can't find the words to express it. So thank you :) I hope you are doing well!
I had to post this review for Chapter 17 because I already reviewed chapter 18 (probably when I first read it haha). You'd think that after 5 years I would be able to post another review! :)
| a fan chapter 18 . 12/3/2014
this is a great story. I really liked it and I like how you make sure to not do a happily ever after. It is a great ending. :) and yah that sounds like what lady catherene would do, try to replace Anne with Georgiana.