Great story!

Was going good but became way to sappy for my liking. Seems like everyone becomes friends and there are no real protagonist.

For anyone who was wondering, Narcissa obliviated her so the light couldn’t track them, or possibly so Harry wouldn’t know he was adopted.

Hope you feel better!

Please do not pair Adrian and Ginny. They don’t work (I don’t think they worked in the original series either) I would like an OC pair or Daphne.

Remus and Sirius, am I right?

Is it Helen of Ravenclaw/The grey lady?

Wait, was it Adrian or Dumbledoor crying?

Actually, Hufflepuff is the house of loyalty, not griffindor. Griffindor is the house of bravery/recklessness, Hufflepuff the house of loyalty, hard work, and anyone who doesn’t fit in anywhere else. Slythirin is the house of pride, ambition, and cunning. Raven law is the house of wit, cleverness, wisdom, and creativity.

Is it the moon girl who came right after Draco?

Great story! Also, can you make Draco part of the golden trio? I would personally enjoy reading about that.

Very well written and original. Looking forward to the sequel. Kudos! ️️

If his eyes changed to that of the malfoys then he shouldn't need glasses? There's no more potter bullshit there soooo... I personally think you should of given him more black looks seeing as he's more closely related to them through the potters the change may have seen that and pulled it forth to make the ritual easier but that's just me I suppose. At the moment I'm not going to lie the way you describe him he looks bloody ridiculous

why not sort harry potter in all the houses

a misture between the original harry potter lucius draco and narcissa malfoy also his grandparents unlce cousins mixture malfoys wouldnt have illtreated him as it would make them kinder aand richer