|Reviews for The Better Life|
| mk94 chapter 1 . 4/23/2014
I know that this AWESOME Story has not many Reviews but you should know that i love it! And there should be more people writing a Review to this masterpiece!
I hope someday you will continue this because this just cant stay like this. It just cant!
Ok i feel bad that i like this. For poor jim, i mean. But that doesnt stop me from...fangirling it.
To make it short. Your story is good. Its interesting and lovely.
| Anonnonnonnonymous chapter 1 . 10/4/2013
Sounds good. Please continue!
| FireFox Vixen chapter 1 . 1/21/2012
i hope to read the 2nd chapter soon
| Gypso chapter 1 . 10/19/2009
I hope you'll write the second chapter...
| 1110000111100001111000111 chapter 1 . 9/16/2009
James T. Kirk? A prostitute? Now that, is something I can safely say, is something I've never read before! This was an interesting start. I quite liked it. When you wrote he was a prostitute I was kinda like "Whoa!" but now I'm intregued! Cant wait to find out what happens next! I hope Jim is okay!