|Reviews for Controlled Burn|
| Guest chapter 6 . 2h
I LOVE THIS STORY! It is really fun, and soooooo good taking things slow to set up the couple
| ttandme69 chapter 30 . 9/18
Awesome story. Loved Grandma Cullen! Emo Bella was difficult to handle for a bit. LOL her water broke - if you want to post an extra special present to your fans - an additional epilogue would be nice. Thanks, Lisa
| Vamps09 chapter 13 . 9/15
Bella really is a spaz! Love the story!
| Guest chapter 30 . 9/8
Sweet and liked the funny bits
| Guest chapter 13 . 9/8
Great writing , like the blog posts and funny ,oments
| Guest chapter 30 . 9/1
You are a great writer.
| Scattycow chapter 3 . 8/26
Why did you have to make her a virgin? Why? Totally spoiled it for me.
| Payton Phalen chapter 30 . 8/2
Can you add more to this story? I just finished it and I'm DYING to hear more.
| Payton Phalen chapter 30 . 7/28
In going to miss ur book sooooooo much.
This was one of my favorite chapters.
Right along with the one where emmet admits to liking Taylor swift. I laughed soo much my brother came in thinking I was dying. Anyways this is my life.
Taylor swift Twilight and Harry Potter
(In other words, music, books and more Books. ;))
| Payton Phalen chapter 26 . 7/27
Okay I'm taking that free therapy session.
Why would you flop new moon?! Okay never mind it's a brilliant idea! But still…
I'm crying in my room right now. I stayed up till two in the morning reading just so you could tell me they broke up!
Okay im done venting.
Love ur stories always
| Payton Phalen chapter 15 . 7/27
Okay okay I'm reviewing! Please no Mike in a Halloween costume. That would be too terrifying. Again I love this story when I'm reading it I get trapped into a parallel universe unaware of time and space.
Please keep writing
| Payton chapter 14 . 7/27
I'm absolutely in love with this artical. It makes me laugh and cry and experience things I've never felt before. Please keep writing.
| Payton Phalen chapter 2 . 7/26
I love this alternate reality! Thnk U sooo much for writing this! As an author myself I thank u
| cctwilight chapter 29 . 7/25
Sweet! Edward is so jealous! Bella is all his so he has nothing to worry about.
| cctwilight chapter 28 . 7/25