Reviews for Controlled Burn
TerriGentry chapter 10 . 8/16
This is the slowest burn ever...I hope this moves faster soon!
RayvinQuill chapter 11 . 7/29
Hi. I’m late to the party but it’s been killing me to know that I’m missing Edward’s point of view. Is it posted somewhere? Or does reviewing for it still work?
This is a fun fic. It’s a quirkier Bella than I usually see, and I love her. I love her in this scenario where she’s got tons of confusing feelings to grapple with, where she’s honest in recognizing that Jasper is still hot even after he’s married (but not in a homewrecker kinda way). I love that she’s been in other settings abd other career paths than what’s standard. I like how Alice seems to be keeping her own secrets. I love the poetry. I’m just generally all around hooked, so thanks for writing this!
Clove Whitlock chapter 21 . 7/4
Love all the plot twists and sensitivity

It’s a great story!

Good job
petmom1213 chapter 11 . 7/1
I'm enjoying your story. But I feel like I'm missing a lot without Edwards POV. You should add it to the story now. Is it still possible? I would love to receive the extra chapters.
Thank you for not making this a Jake story.
Zveka chapter 30 . 4/23
Great story :)

Edward was the best, Alice need to have a life
Guest chapter 30 . 2/14
I love this story so much it wonderful and thank youfoe sharing it. Please write more you are very talented. Regards Toni
Lulutbo chapter 30 . 11/29/2022
I just love this story!
Guest chapter 15 . 11/14/2022
loving this story. so the threats about reviewing has worked. can't wait to read the edward POV after I finish
CynMar Rom chapter 30 . 11/11/2022
Awww man, I really wished there was a next epilougue.
This was such a cool story, and I love me some responsible, present parent Edward, the fact that he's a stay at home dad is even hotter lol.
Thank you so much for sharing!
TwimomJen chapter 27 . 11/9/2022
Binging this . Did you ever post the outtake regarding the alternate ending of Alice? I read The Fireman and didn't see anything about it. Loved this story.
quartkneerocks chapter 2 . 11/3/2022
I am very excited about this story! My husband is 5,years younger and we always joke about what it would have been like if we met sooner. We always say it would have ended in disaster if we had met any sooner.
dpennell007 chapter 30 . 10/10/2022
I loved your kind, love struck Edward. He was a sweetheart. Alice started out nice, but boy was I surprised that she turned out to be the despicable villain of the piece. Fortunately, everything worked out in the end - which is all that matters!
Bella034 chapter 14 . 2/25/2022
Can I pleassseee have the EPOV
I love this book so much and am dying to see what Edward was thinking while this was going on!
Bella034 chapter 11 . 2/25/2022
I love the book could you please send me EPOV?
divyvicki chapter 30 . 2/12/2022
Edward with 5 girls is just too funny! Alice with a tomboy, precious!
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