Reviews for Controlled Burn
ttandme69 chapter 30 . 9/18/2017
Awesome story. Loved Grandma Cullen! Emo Bella was difficult to handle for a bit. LOL her water broke - if you want to post an extra special present to your fans - an additional epilogue would be nice. Thanks, Lisa
Vamps09 chapter 13 . 9/15/2017
Bella really is a spaz! Love the story!
Guest chapter 30 . 9/8/2017
Sweet and liked the funny bits
Guest chapter 13 . 9/8/2017
Great writing , like the blog posts and funny ,oments
Guest chapter 30 . 9/1/2017
You are a great writer.
Scattycow chapter 3 . 8/26/2017
Why did you have to make her a virgin? Why? Totally spoiled it for me.
Payton Phalen chapter 30 . 8/2/2017
Can you add more to this story? I just finished it and I'm DYING to hear more.
Payton Phalen chapter 30 . 7/28/2017
In going to miss ur book sooooooo much.
This was one of my favorite chapters.
Right along with the one where emmet admits to liking Taylor swift. I laughed soo much my brother came in thinking I was dying. Anyways this is my life.

Taylor swift Twilight and Harry Potter

(In other words, music, books and more Books. ;))

Books always

Payton
Payton Phalen chapter 26 . 7/27/2017
Okay I'm taking that free therapy session.

WTF?!

Why would you flop new moon?! Okay never mind it's a brilliant idea! But still…
I'm crying in my room right now. I stayed up till two in the morning reading just so you could tell me they broke up!

Okay im done venting.

Love ur stories always

Payton
Payton Phalen chapter 15 . 7/27/2017
Okay okay I'm reviewing! Please no Mike in a Halloween costume. That would be too terrifying. Again I love this story when I'm reading it I get trapped into a parallel universe unaware of time and space.
Please keep writing
No book
No universe
No life
—Payton
Payton chapter 14 . 7/27/2017
I'm absolutely in love with this artical. It makes me laugh and cry and experience things I've never felt before. Please keep writing.

For me
For anyone
Forever
Payton Phalen chapter 2 . 7/26/2017
I love this alternate reality! Thnk U sooo much for writing this! As an author myself I thank u
cctwilight chapter 29 . 7/25/2017
Sweet! Edward is so jealous! Bella is all his so he has nothing to worry about.
cctwilight chapter 28 . 7/25/2017
Awww!
cctwilight chapter 27 . 7/25/2017
Thank goodness!
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