Reviews for Phobia Malady
Netbug009 chapter 1 . 12/21/2013
This reminds me of Riku in Kingdom Hearts a little.
Shizuku Tsukishima749 chapter 1 . 10/27/2010
lol. Indeed. Mandarin is fun, isn't he? XD This is AWESOME! I LOVE this! Is Mandarin canonically afraid of the dark (whether that be literal darkness or the evil side of the war)? I've read it in a different fanfic, too, and I'm rather curious. U Rock on! I adored this! *U* You portrayed Mandarin- granted, even one scared out of his wits- perfectly! *U* Rock on!
Fastern chapter 1 . 9/20/2009
That's funny. (Bashes computer) I thought I reviewed this. Never mind, I DID review this, so why ain't it showing up?

But before I destroy my computer, I better try this again.

I enjoyed this thoroughly. It is just so suitable for Mandarin. I believe this really captures his descent into insanity. The narrative flows together really well, in passing, it is much like a prayer. That is what helps capture the moment, allowing the story to grow darker and more mysterious as it progresses.

I'm flattered you wrote this for my sake. :Fave:
Netbug-Archive chapter 1 . 9/14/2009
It seems fine now to me as far as the rules go. (shrug)

Anyways, very nicely done. Good emotional detail. Fitting for Mandarin. It has a nice feeling of foreshadowing, but is also very eerie.