Reviews for Reasons
Guest chapter 1 . 12/24/2016
It was short but still great! It's definitely something that seems plausible to have happened in the manga. Though I agree with one of the reviewers, "CityHunter12", if I got the username right.
Youji Zero chapter 1 . 11/9/2012
good story
CityHunter12 chapter 1 . 10/4/2009
Hey, good job! I like the idea of the story (that line of Allen's is one of my favorites) and the interaction between Allen and Lavi. My one critique would be the paragraph where Allen explains his past. I think I would like to see more reaction in between the words; more descriptions of Allen's and Lavi's expressions, what their tone of voice is, small hand movements, etc. Does that make sense? I'm a very visual person, so I love those sort of details.
addenza chapter 1 . 9/14/2009
It was short and sweet. Okay, maybe not so short, but the feelings are pretty well-portrayed.