Reviews for The Innocence of Herons
kittykatloren chapter 1 . 8/19/2010
Naughty!Leanne :) Very nice fic!

- Kitty
crazygunbladergirl chapter 1 . 11/26/2009
haha leanne, you naughty thing, you!

i love naesala's attempts to insult himself. just too sexy... oh darn.

lovely job. :)
FlamingDoritos chapter 1 . 10/14/2009
Very nice. VERY nice. _ Leanne, you dirty girl. I always knew she was something like this.
Panda chapter 1 . 9/16/2009
It should be Leanne/Naesala instead!

She is really strong-willed, but a lot of people seem too distracted by her pretty and innocent appearance. Love how you portrayed her!

Ravens loved gold. No wonder he’d always had a thing for Herons.

This line! XD
NinjaSheik chapter 1 . 9/15/2009
PPP SSC chapter 1 . 9/15/2009
I love your writing; I love Naesala/Leanne; and I love Naesala so all of them together is GREAT!

I enjoyed your use of Naesala's attempted insults at himself. Especially the "really wears those clothes well" one, because I don't even see how that could be construed as an insult. (Although I guess "so sexy it hurts" isn't either; maybe "so sexy it's a curse" would have given the punchline more punch/incredibly lame pun)
angelicakes chapter 1 . 9/14/2009
This was really nice. I enjoyed every word. Thank you!
Riku-Aura777 chapter 1 . 9/13/2009
Aww... you write one of my favorite, underappreicated Fire Emblem pairings so well. I especially loved when Leanne offered to protect him. That just made me laugh, because I'm trying to picture it. I can't really, but it's still cute.

Great job with the one-shot!