Reviews for What You Never Had
Michael J Angelo chapter 1 . 10/12/2014
Too cute, I really love the way you write the dark turtles. Dark Leo and Dark Mike learning to be brothers is so heartbreaking and sweet, it makes me want to read all the more about them.

Well done, as usual :")
Kountry101 chapter 1 . 9/2/2014
Awwww the dark turtles are so cute in their own learning-how-to-be-a-family type of way.
FifthDayOfMay chapter 1 . 8/12/2014
I love the way Dark Leo treats Dark Mikey. Its so cute, it's all gruff in a shy kind of way but so darn fond and loving. Like, he wants to be a big brother and be there for him but he doesn't always know how. Because this is his family and he's still getting used to that. That Dark Mikey is his family and he can be a big brother and what not. And Dark Mikey, still having trouble with wanting things and being allowed to want things. Everything about this just kills me. I love it.
Muse2488 chapter 1 . 11/2/2012
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D.D. Natanya chapter 1 . 2/8/2012
This-in my opinion- is such a cute story! Thank-you very much for writing this series!
MyMusesSpeakToMe chapter 1 . 5/2/2010
B'aw, brother fluff! Seriosly, the D-Turtles were the best thing about the FF and THEN... They were only in it for two or three episodes. WTH? Well I guess that's where the beauty of Fanfiction comes in!
Alonein-Darkness7 chapter 1 . 2/2/2010
You need to write more Dark Clones stories. Seriously. I just love your personification of them and the interaction between Dark Leo and Dark Mikey. You did such a lovely job with this little world you've created!
Okami1 chapter 1 . 10/28/2009
I got the biggest laugh out of "...well, gentle for him at any rate. Probably scare the daylights out of regular people..." I can just see D-Leo glaring daggers at D-Mike, but in a brotherly way. XD

I love the way you portray these two. I've had a soft spot for the clones ever since they appeared and D-Leo in particular when he spent time with the originals. They are so in character. I wish they'd had more screen time. But that's what fanfiction's for! Keep up the great work! I hope you write them more often. _
Tauni chapter 1 . 9/18/2009
This was fantastic. I loved your other Dark Mike and Dark Leo story and this is just as good. I like the relationship that you have created between the two, it's great to read. I hope that you do more of these two, I truely enjoy them!
Tori-chan chapter 1 . 9/16/2009
Aww... X3

Adorable, in a nice, angsty way. And I about laughed my ass off when I read about the kitchen accident. XD

Though it would have been fun to see how a 'nice' Dark Don would have come out, or Dark Raph. But I adore these two! *points at D-Leo and D-Mikey*
FantasyFan so lazy chapter 1 . 9/16/2009
You write the best Dark Clone ficcage I've yet to see, milady.

It's sweet and charming and unique, but it keeps that darker sort of edge that always hangs around them. Dark Mike is so endearing

And Dark Leo is made of luv. Weird macho not in the open luv, but it's still there. It was excellent and I will most likely be reading it a few more times. -hands cookie-

I particularly loved "Because you're allowed."

That was wondrous.
yaoigirl22 chapter 1 . 9/14/2009
I had to read Follow the Leader first and loved it!

And now I love this one, it made me go aw!

Good Job!
Mikell chapter 1 . 9/14/2009
Oh, this is at the same time cute and sad. I like it. Never having really seen the FF series, I wasn't sure of the characters, but now that I've read, I like it.

Nice job. :)

Rejoicing in the day,

-Mary
Kallasilya chapter 1 . 9/14/2009
I saw a 'New Story' email in my inbox with your name attached to it, and I couldn't click on the thing quick enough! This is a fascinating read, just like the first one was. You seem to be extremely good at walking that fine line between characteristics that belong to the 'originals' and little things that give Dark Leo/Mikey their own distinct identities. I think what I love best about your Dark characters is the way you handle their vulnerability (particularly Mikey, of course). It's irresistible.

Thanks for the great read! :)