Reviews for The needs of the many
black-hurt17 chapter 2 . 11/9/2009
drools* more please.
astrakage chapter 2 . 11/7/2009
Now you can do all the different reactions of everyone. Harry would probably like to travel the world and learn more about it. What about a crossover with Stargate?
Tommy14 chapter 2 . 11/6/2009
I began reading this story at HPFandom and saw your note about your account here...Low and behold! a new chapter! I loved the care and concern that Raphael showed Harry...not to forget the lust. I think that he is the first person to really put Harry as a priority. The fact that Harry is showing a more submissive side is probably due to trusting Raphael and letting himself just feel safe and loved by him...especially after the turning. I don't think that he'll act that way to others. I'm looking forward to the Wizarding World finding out about his new situation. Please do bash Dumbledore, Sirius and the rest.
Ell Roche chapter 2 . 11/6/2009
This was really hot. XD And embarassing to read when my sister's in the room. Nice work.
HELLSFLAME666 chapter 2 . 11/2/2009
An xover with star treck 0.0...0.0... well I guss you are the author *shrugs* you should also put this on they wont deleat your account for it.

hp./
Rulern Av Ost chapter 1 . 11/1/2009
Yummy. Me likes.:D Please update soon x3

Å... Er du NORSK? O.O Så at du hadde en Norsk fanfic. o.O

Skumle saker det der.
excentrykemuse chapter 2 . 10/31/2009
You have to continue this at least one more chapter (well, you don't have to, but it could be a great three- or four-shot. the third could be the confrontation with dumbledore and the wizarding world's reaction if they find out and then the fourth could be an epilogue of what life is like after raphael takes care of voldemort and harry leaves the wizarding world for good).

best of luck ...

... and would you be writing a crossover between star trek and hp? that would be interesting. i have no idea where it would go ... but ... hmm ...

cheers, cen
Tomoko-Mai chapter 2 . 10/31/2009
Yay, my daily dose of yaoi (though this borders on porn but, hey, you don't see me complaining :D ). Love it, love it, love it; I might've re-read it for at least 5 times...obsessed, I know :-J But...it's way too HOT *fans herself*

Well, my opinion won't help much, seeing already that it's possible you'll have to make it a crossover with True Blood. My requirements? As long you DON'T CHANGE THE PAIRING and you CONTINUE THE STORY, I'm happy with whatever you'll do.

So, good luck with your work!
excentrykemuse chapter 1 . 10/31/2009
That is simply an amazing Harry/OMC - and it's a vampire! when I first began to read it, I was a little skeptical, but you just pulled it all together beautifully. You've made Raphael into a character in his own right and made him fit in both vampire canon and the harry potter world so seamlessly.

and i want to kill dumbledore and ron and hermione. and even sirius. or perhaps i want to hurt sirius the most. how could he do that to his godson? *feels ill*
amimochi123 chapter 2 . 10/29/2009
I really enjoyed this! Though personally I wouldn't go for a Star Trek crossover, it doesn't really fit for me.

Good job, please post more!
basiln chapter 2 . 10/28/2009
nice. looking forward to seeing dumbles in a snit.
Red Valentino chapter 2 . 10/24/2009
no star trek please, I don't think it fits. i think you do the effect of this change with harry...there's nothing like a good anti dumble and others story (for me)
Suezanne chapter 1 . 10/21/2009
twice? I'll have you know I've lived enought for at least three times including wall climbing tree climbing and being on the roof of a two story building take a hint and guess that I LOVE high places
MsChleom chapter 2 . 10/21/2009
A next that is certainly, maybe with Firefly/Serenity ? But if Star Trek, a little explain for the neophyte (me )
Skullera chapter 2 . 10/19/2009
Really like this idea so far... Harry falling in love seemed a bit quick but I supposed you could say that he was allowing his instincts to guide him on this one. But i love the dynamics between the whole father, childe, lover, mentor, etc thing. If you're looking for suggestions for what comes next, maybe if you concentrate the story around the vampire community, so like raphael said, his court is more powerful than voldemort, have them destroy the bastard and his army, but also punish those that dared to hurt harry as well. So defenitly have the headmaster pay for plkaying god,m i think. But don't turn it inot a bashing everyone story. but i do want to see some proper headmaster getting his just rewwards. Do you read mpregs? Cos that would be a nice subplot. with harry learning more about what it means to be a vampire... perhaps having the other vampires become overprotected of him as a change of him being used in the past... Maybe the wizards feel the vampires stole their hero so they decide to wage war on the vampires and suddenly harry is fighting against the very people whom he sacrificed so much for in the past... really there are so many routes this story could go and i'm sure that when inspiration hits you will come up with an amzing plot to go with th rest of your story. Whatever you write, i'm sure everyone will enjoy.

Hope to see more soon.
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