|Reviews for Lovegame|
| jk chapter 14 . 3/19
this all seems so plotless
| jk chapter 11 . 3/19
I really don't understand why bella wants him...hes nothing but a douche and it seems too premature to have her feeling that way.
| jk chapter 5 . 3/19
why not just drink all the blood? oh because then there would be no story at all I guess.
| jk chapter 4 . 3/19
I don't get why she would be dreaming about him...it really takes away from the story doesn't it. It adds nothing but annoyance
| jk chapter 2 . 3/19
at the end of chapter two you write that its awful of Edward "messing" with bell like this...but he hasn't really messed with her or toyed with her has he? All hes done so far is stalk her and take her book...ohhhhh watch out...stupid
| LolaTheSa chapter 15 . 4/11/2016
Part of me thinks she's just his mate but since she's human, she's like a singer.. That he can have complete control over.. That'll explain her reactions to him.. If he is her mate..
If not... Idk... you don't really have any where really to go... you made this feral.. vvery unappealing Edward... Only way I see you going is t make her his mate and make her a vampire and she tortures him like he did her... in a mmore brutal way since they would be both vampires..
| jk chapter 13 . 9/25/2015
why is she doing anything he fucking says after what he did?
Edwards a fucking moron..your mine, you will obey...wtf? is he stupid? he just killed the only leverage he had over her and he still expects her to "obey" and why in the fuck is bella doing it? bellas being a fucktard
| marley01 chapter 15 . 9/13/2015
Omg ive just read your story again, i loved it the first time, even better the second. Please think about taking it up again. Sx
| Guest chapter 15 . 5/29/2015
Loved it, thank you.
| Guest chapter 13 . 5/29/2015
I'm not understanding why she doesn't shoot herself.
| Guest chapter 11 . 5/29/2015
I'm glad to hear that we are not going to have to watch Bella helplessly being tortured forever!
| Guest chapter 9 . 5/26/2015
Perhaps her oven is gas...
| Guest chapter 8 . 5/26/2015
Perhaps she could throw herself off a cliff?
| Guest chapter 5 . 5/24/2015
It's a pity there are no trains in Forks for Bella to throw herself under.
| Guest chapter 4 . 5/23/2015
Is Bella just going to surrender?