Reviews for Demon? |
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![]() ![]() ![]() 60 chapters in and there's not a single instance of reader satisfaction/justice for the MC. 60 chapters in and we're still on team assignment day. Oof. |
![]() ![]() ![]() No. She's too busy listening to Silk's Freak Me |
![]() ![]() ![]() good |
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![]() ![]() ![]() nnnn |
![]() ![]() ![]() and with that we end the chapter with (how to write trash fics) thank you and goodbye |
![]() ![]() ![]() it's funny that you've specifically stated that there isn't a more correct way for dialogue, in other words quotes vs double quotes. there is actually, but it depends on where you are from. if you are from America, then double quotes is the proper way and if you are from England, then it's single quotes. overall... yes it's up to author preference, but think of it this way. when you say something you think of it before you say it, or, in other words, it's iterated twice. when you think of it, it's iterated once. so, you can easily see why double quotes is quite popular as a "standardish" way of writing dialogue, because it's easily distinguished. regardless, I've read enough of your stuff that... I've just learned to think backwards regarding your dialogue and it isn't a big issue after doing so. |
![]() ![]() ![]() yo waiting for u |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ino need to not be in this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() go to bing. they have some of the best translator |
![]() ![]() great chapter. |
![]() ![]() Good Chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() this fucking hinata is so annoying! and this story altogether.. the plot is so slow... |
![]() ![]() ![]() you forgot wind |
![]() ![]() ![]() Seeing thr elements mixing at bottom, THATS THE AVATAR ELEMENTS NOT THE NARUTO ONES. Sorry.. in the Naruto verse there are 5 main elements not 4. Earth, water, wind, fire and lightning, in no particular order there, fire and WIND is skortch. Earth and wind i can believe but fire and water is boil. Not blood. Blood would just be water. Biology. Over 75% of the human body is made of water. Stands to reason that water style can manipulate blood. |