Reviews for Demon?
D chapter 60 . 3/4
While the story depth is good you have to realize that the reader wants to go forward. You took sixty chapters to finish through to the genin exams. True your chapters were fairly short; still progress lacked. That is the only true flaw I see in the story. I don't critique on grammar or usage unless it is absolutely horrid. Mostly writers have grounding in the use of each but often rely on proofreaders and editors to find flaws.
Rosenkruz chapter 38 . 2/11
Why have you got Raiton listed as a Bloodline? Katon, Suiton, Doton, Futon, and Raiton are the 5 Basic Elements. No Combinations required to gain them. Also, Katon Suiton Futton (Boil Release, aka Vapor Style). Just seems weird to me.
LarryP33 chapter 30 . 2/6
Never understood how Naruto could be 12 yrs. Old unless he's 15 now. Also it would be nice to c pictures of Kyuubi in her human form. Otherwise gr8 chapters and explanations. & much
korlinki chapter 1 . 1/9
2/10 weak story
Guest chapter 12 . 12/5/2017
Yo can u plz continue or at least tell us y u have not written for a few years I know ur still active u have stories that we're recently added to ur favorite's I just have to look at their publish date
Ash0011 chapter 59 . 11/23/2017
Neat
reid hinds568 chapter 49 . 9/6/2017
why don,t you give naruto sommoning jutsu female tiger and the shadow clone jutsu and sommoning kitsune jutsu and female unicorn sommoning and the mate mark and i think his sommons should be master tigress from kung fu panda and krystal fox and kyuubi and a unicorn named jasmine
nitewolf423 chapter 60 . 7/17/2017
Is this gonna be continuing
55narutoboy chapter 38 . 7/1/2017
Shoton is actually a Kekkei Tota its a combination of Earth Lightning Water
silver-blast chapter 41 . 5/24/2017
this story is really bad. dont read it. it says lemon, but im forty chapters in and theres nothing. also, naruto is pretty weak. really dissapointing.
lucasrosa94 chapter 56 . 5/12/2017
é boa a istória mais você está avansando muito lentamente a istória.
Quincy Gillian chapter 1 . 4/20/2017
(Sarcasam) Let's make kurama a human, yay. (Not Sarcasm) Another story on my I will not read list.
Anonamysfan chapter 60 . 3/30/2017
When is it gonna update again
Guest chapter 60 . 3/19/2017
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nenopip chapter 38 . 12/22/2016
So this is just going to follow canon. Well you post a reader because if I'm going to read the same shit that happened in the anime then I might Aswell just fucking watch the anime.
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