|Reviews for Worried|
| Dakimomoe chapter 14 . 5/17/2013
Well, it was a great fluffy but angsty journey.
I am actually supposed to type more but sleepiness is stopping me, and I need it badly. I even feel like I could sleep here in front of my laptop like, right now. It's comfortably cold here too, aah.
Welp, long story short, I love the fluffiness (especially their first kiss), the stair accident (beep beep sadist side comin' in), and some of the angst as well.
I would've typed some CnC a long with those shizz but decided against it, why? My eyelid freaking feels heavy man, I really want to sleep. Teehee, so see ya', peace.
| DiedofBoredom chapter 2 . 4/9/2012
OMG that's so romantic! its flippin adorable!
| RandomXXX chapter 1 . 3/3/2011
Lame & Gay... totally.
| Chiyo And Osaka Fan chapter 12 . 2/23/2010
Best chapter so far also looking forward to the next chapter!
| Clotifoth chapter 14 . 2/17/2010
! # %$ #% !
You ended it at the greatest part! The best climax! The part where things may have gotten better or worse or anything! Just to re-write parts of it? Grah! *throws wooden chair at wall that splinters into hundreds of pieces*
So frustrating! Right in the best part of the best part!
This was a really good story, I'd have to say. The beginning chapters may have been short- but they were good that way. They were excellent and concise- they emphasized the mood of later, longer chapters in a manner most excellent!
*sigh* I suppose that all a faithful reader can do at this point is pray your rewriting goes fast, or that you make more chapters. as I assume you haven't abandoned this, I'm gonna subscribe to this story. :)
| Exhausted chapter 1 . 1/14/2010
First paragraph: Not that anyone was going to be told…
Passive form is a bad thing. Change it. Also, you introduce Kagami's feelings way too abruptly. No subtlety or nuance. You're hitting readers in the face with a shovel that has "lesbianism" written on it.
| Sket chapter 13 . 1/10/2010
I'm writing this from the grave. That "You'll stay here and hold me, right?" killed me. This is definitely top notch when it comes to angst in Lucky Star, and you're doing this story very well. I patiently (not) await the next chapter.
| Belthasar chapter 13 . 11/15/2009
You know, I almost didn't read up until this point. The first few chapters seemed way too short and they weren't very good. You've been improving a lot since then, though there is always room for more improvement. Anyway, I'm looking forward to reading about Kagami's return to school.
| Arch3rher0 chapter 13 . 11/9/2009
wow, that's a great nightmare. Abandoning konata for some chocolate...
keep up the good work!
| Shadowfox026 chapter 13 . 11/6/2009
A vivid nightmare but one which was really well described. It's a little haunting, but fits in well with Kagami's fears. The flow of the story and how it is described is of a very good quality.
| Redline57 chapter 13 . 11/6/2009
Well it was sorta off track, but drams do tend to be wierd like that, so its completely believable, so I'd say very good job on writing that. More fluff now! Hehe. But seriously, that was a good chapter.
| kitmaro chapter 13 . 11/5/2009
Wow that was A-grade dramatic/scary. Till next time.
| JDizzle112 chapter 13 . 11/5/2009
wow this was stunning the nightmare was just awesome yet creepy and dramatic and emotional and a 5th thing
| xKoori chapter 13 . 11/5/2009
The nightmare send a really shiver down my spine, really.
I could imagine really well how scared Kagami was, it was kinda creepy.
Keep up your awesome writing.
I'll also agree on the M-rated content, just keep it for now, it would ruin the mood you gave off with this awesome chapter.
| Eric Neo Matrix chapter 13 . 11/5/2009
... Wow. Just wow.
I dunno about you, but this may be the most angsty Lucky Star fic ever written.
And despite certain OOC moments, one of the most well-written too.