Reviews for New Guardian, New Life
martin.presston.9 chapter 1 . 20m
hi there and sorry to be the 1 to tell you but even after the revamp of this chapter theres still quite a few spelling and gramatical errors but other than those small things it seems to be a good story so far thank you.
Sianna Scale chapter 28 . 5/11
That was reeeaaally good! I thoroughly enjoyed it!
Bronze chapter 5 . 4/30
Mini keeps that up and she won't be going anywhere but to bed! And be in need of a hangover cure the following day!
Bronze chapter 4 . 4/30
Of course not! The impossible is normal for Harry Potter! Being normal is what is impossible for Harry Potter!
Bronze chapter 3 . 4/30
She can dream and that's all she can do.
Bronze chapter 2 . 4/30
Time to run away old man! Don't go away mad. Don't go away sad. JUST GO AWAY! And the farther away you go the better!
brightflare chapter 28 . 3/30
Very good story!
Goose chapter 1 . 3/8
Another cliché filled bashfest. Honestly why did you even waste time writing this?
A friend chapter 2 . 2/16
You have a good story, but you have a few mistakes that disrupt the flow. I suggest getting a beta and combing through with them to catch the little things.
juan chapter 6 . 2/12
the gay dark lord never learns he's failure in live just ask his former boyfriend who both killed dumbledore's sister and his fail experiment tom is a failure in life and a coward
tkim619 chapter 16 . 1/28
oohhh... come Ginny change him! OHH YESS LUNA IS POTTER! ARRGGH STUPID DEATH EATER!
tkim619 chapter 11 . 1/28
good job guy! protecting Harry and Hermione relationship! RON DONT EVEN THINK, SHE WAS NEVER YOURS ANYWAYS
tkim619 chapter 8 . 1/28
YES!
tkim619 chapter 6 . 1/28
hahahahah lol!hahaha lol!
tkim619 chapter 2 . 1/28
HAHAH OMG OMG every time i read love story about these two, "soul bond" always come up... everytime
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