Reviews for The Bet
Danni chapter 24 . 11/15
Finally finishing this crazy ass story... Thanks, it was and remains, one helluva read.
Right chapter 24 . 8/17
Sorry but dafuq is this?
insomniac1970 chapter 24 . 7/15
I am so glad that you finished it. I definitely know what it feels like to lose my mojo and I'm not even HALF the writer that you are. Good luck to you, and thank you for sharing your talent with us!
NyaZilla chapter 24 . 6/25
Not a problem here, understood sometime ago. As such the wait per the norm was worth it.
So much going this would be one helluva action drama says i.
lord of the land of fire chapter 24 . 6/25
Ria would be the worst slave ever. Congrats on giving this thing an ending.
chimera629 chapter 24 . 6/24
Just wow still can't figure out why he would do such a thing unless the while thing was a trick
Rufael chapter 24 . 6/24
You finished it :O. I'm so happy! Thank you :)
It had a good ending. But why stop writing?
kaijin36 chapter 24 . 6/24
I thank you from the bottom of my Heart
pwashington chapter 24 . 6/24
I gotta say i wasn't expecting an updste from you i guess miracles do happen
CrazyGammerGuy12 chapter 24 . 6/24
Awesomeness level over 9000
Red-CLOUD-001 chapter 23 . 4/17/2016
Rubbish... pure and simple
It goes completely against the plot of the story you based it off!
Tsukune's character is completely OOC from both the actual anime-plot and the story you based the plot on!
He is caring and considerate... not a rapist, and definitely not abusive!
I find that anime writers often make their stories extremely exaggerated compared to fics from other genres, which
normally is ok. But your story starts off ok-ish (but slightly OOC) and ends up just about you bashing the main
characters and having a go at everyone - what is the plot? how will it end? There cannot be a happy ending!
It's like writing a Naruto fic where he is kind and caring and loving... and then having him torture, rape and kill
everyone the next chapter! It makes the end-result impossible for anything happy, as how can the other MC's forget
that he basically raped, hit and abused Kurumu... and how could he forget that he did that, even if he repressed it
there would (and should) have been a much clearer result in how she treated him afterwards, and in how he acted!

I just don't understand why you needed to basically ruin such a good story idea... the previous story was great, with
dragons and demons and goblins - mixed with sly devious vampire goodness - but your idea is to just throw all that
out of the metaphoric window and instead "bash" all the main characters until they cannot look each other in the eye
without feeling an intense emotional response of either hatred, fear or disgust!

*SIGH* ... nevermind, it's not like you continued it anyways - it's been over five years since you updated the story!
Rufael chapter 23 . 10/11/2015
What? It is not finished? It was so good and now... a big nothing :(. Why? At least could you please write a last chapter? It only needs one more i think. It needs an ending. Really! I just realised it is not finished while reading the last chapter. Sure enough... The characters are a bit different then in the manga... But it is a fanfic after all. I really liked the dinner chapter. Read the "careful what you wish for". Loved that too, was so happy that in this story she did not do it... so it needs a decent ending at least. Pleaaasee :(
1337Pwny chapter 23 . 8/2/2015
Well I didn't read the reviews to find out it wasn't a completed fic(kinda wished I did) but none the less 23 chapters of solid story, Interesting OC and tons of originality. My only wish is that it had a conclusion
maxe03 chapter 20 . 11/16/2014
wow so she basically rapes moka in a bathroom and insults his technique saying women are better then men then talks about male ego and pride like women dont have either. also wow tskune is a ass in this
brenden chapter 23 . 11/14/2014
Can you please finish this story
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