|Reviews for Pity the Children|
| Kittenseal chapter 5 . 3/6
I'm not sure if you'll even get this but I wanted to review anyways. This was heart-wrenching. It hurt to read this and I kinda want to cry and at the same time beat the ever loving sh*t out that worthless piece of slime who would hurt anyone, especially children, like he did. I wanna hold Jim and Spock and keep them safe together, so that they can heal. I hope everything turns out well for both Jim and Spock and the other children. I'm imagining it to be so anyway, so I'm hoping. Um, are Jim and Spock in a relationship because it seems like there's something there and... I don't know, Jim kinda terrified me a couple of times, though I'm glad he was able to find comfort with Spock.
| Guest chapter 5 . 1/23
Awsome please update
| IchikoKitsuneKoumori chapter 1 . 1/10
what about the other children?
| Guest chapter 5 . 8/17/2013
Very very good. Kirk has this experiwnce in his past. Will u use Tarsus in ur story?
Justice and vengence are very close for law enforcement types.
Still a lot of this in our world
| KionaRinton chapter 5 . 6/18/2013
I love your story its very interesting, I hope you update soon... Please!
| darksideofnight chapter 5 . 6/7/2013
This story is so amazing! Hopefully you come back to it sometime!
| SETO-KAIBA-LIFE chapter 5 . 5/21/2013
Please update soon, poor spock, i hope he wasn't raped :(
| Guest chapter 5 . 5/18/2013
Please continue ! :)
| MSU82 chapter 5 . 4/27/2013
I wish you would continue this. This story is amazing, considering it's dark and twistedness, but I love it none the less. It's been three years, so there is little chance, but I hope yo update soon.
| tannervin chapter 1 . 4/8/2013
Excellent beginning - but a malnourished dehydrated 7-year-old would not weigh 90 pounds. Probably half that.
| Mitodoteira chapter 5 . 3/5/2013
I keep reading out of morbid curiosity... I want to know what happened out of morbid curiosity as well. Also, does Spock still have his memories?
| Harte-Lore chapter 5 . 1/28/2013
I have no words for how sad, well written, and utterly amazing this is. I was all for Kirk to just outright brutally murder the Auctioneer, but I think I like the idea of him having to answer to the parents of the kids better. Also, Spock and Kirk's scene in the last chapter was insanely touching. I hope you update soon.
| Hugs and Bunnies chapter 5 . 1/2/2013
Ok, I NEED you to finish this story! Please. It is so well written, and I need to know what happens between Spock and Kirk! I'm not the only one who really wants you to keep writing, so please, boldly go on!
| Shadowcat2428 chapter 5 . 5/9/2012
I LOVE THIS STORY! write more!
| Azure Gryphon chapter 5 . 4/18/2012
This is a very exciting read. It's got me on edge. I look forward to more.