Reviews for Inferno
freyja0taku chapter 2 . 5/27/2016
This is really great! Poor Roxas, I cried hard at his part.. T.T .. It's wonderful that I felt the pain while reading this.. I'm seriously glad that it ended in a positive way.. :3
Bookworm 11114 chapter 2 . 1/18/2014
Wonderful. Just. . . wonderful.
Saika Murasaki chapter 2 . 9/11/2012
Ah i wonder wtf is wrong with Namine and Sora past :D
Guest chapter 2 . 7/3/2012
You're under arrest for making me cry.
Lulu chapter 2 . 5/4/2012
HOW THE HELL HAD I NOT ENCOUNTERED THIS BEFORE! wow This amazing it shows the dynamic between Rox, Nam and Sora since the whole memories stuff, so I think it really fits the situation in the game. It really is amazing. GREAT JOB! Love it, Lulu :D
Phoebiie chapter 1 . 12/12/2011
Its so beautiful..everything in this fiction. I admire your skill a lot, totally love the way you write the story. I can feel the love, the angst and the pain throughout the story. Also, the new ray of light at the end of the last chapter. :)

All in all, awesome fic! will definitely add this to my fav!
pendingLife chapter 2 . 8/24/2011
You know, I've read a few fabrics and I've read a few of yours, and I can kinda truly say that this fic has to be one of our master piece. Or in the running for it.

I like how last chapter centered on this tragic cycle. In this one we have the cycle broken, and both characters are slowly going off into a tangent. Near the end they reunite and the tangent merged.

I really love this story. I could read it ten times and nit get tired of it. It's sad but powerful. It really does draws the reader in but not in the most obvious ways.

I'd just like to note that you switch perspective quite often. Might need to take more notice while writing it. I would also like to say that I'm glad it's only 2 chapters. This ending was nice.

Thank you for presenting us with this. I absolutely enjoyed 'Inferno' :)
pendingLife chapter 1 . 8/24/2011

This is truly beautiful. It's believable. And it's almost real. I thunk you were successful in keeping the characters to themselves as much as you can here.

Vulnerability within Namine is something that can be understood. She is fragile although strong within. You've captured their outer and physical layer well. Namine, fragile and lost. Roxas, troubled but grounded.

This is a truly amazing story. It has quality and depth. And it's not cliche. Or at least you've twisted and written it in a way to cover that.

I'm a fan. I love it.
Draco Oblivion chapter 2 . 5/14/2011
This is really sad...

Someone made an uh oh... His name's Roxas not Sora...


Yay she listened to me :)

I'm gladit ended on a happy note, I thought I was going to be left depressed...
Draco Oblivion chapter 1 . 5/14/2011
This seems really emotional...

Aaw he tries so hard but she remains unresponsive, he takes it as a cue to leave but she just won't let go...

I'm guessing that by HIM you mean Sora... It's always Sora -.- I wonder what happened

:O they're brothers... I really want to know what happened between Sora and Namine but I'm happy that Roxas has left her, it wasn't healthy...

Oh ok so I'm unhappy again, Sora left her so she went for the next best thing, the substitute that is powerless when it comes to her... sucks for him :/
Namixas 4 ever chapter 2 . 5/11/2011
I love your story it made me cry at the first chapter and i couldn't stop giggling when I read the ending of chapter 2 Keep up the good work!
Kutlessrocker chapter 2 . 3/12/2011
Cool story. It played on every single emotion and it was a great read. I haven't read a story that good in a long time.
BrunoTheWolf chapter 2 . 2/8/2011
Beautifully written :D

I love how you wrote this story, it really touched me.

So, keep writing more amazing stories and the world will be perfect. :DD
zaksaturdays chapter 2 . 11/29/2010
FFFF. Hey, Julz, this is Brooke! :)

Just wanted to say I enjoyed this story like none other,

and I listened to the song while I read it!

Brilliant, entirely.

I'll definitely be checking out more of your stories, Asap! :D
truthlieslovestars chapter 2 . 9/4/2010
OMG this is a really great story
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