Reviews for What Goes Around
EHSparkwoman chapter 23 . 2/11
This was really good! I liked it; particularly the relationship that developed between Starscream and Swoop. I don't imagine that he'll be a loyal servant to this queen, a loyal follower; but not a servant... I hope that the offspring doesn't look too much like his father...
Hebi R chapter 23 . 1/23/2013
THis AU was absolutely fun for me, and I am eager to explore your universe. I really hope to read about what happened when Starscream showed up at the Nemesis with Slag and Ratchet in tow, and at least the beginnings of trying to get the 'cons under control and announce the new queen.
Guest chapter 22 . 7/4/2012
"Prowl and all his...Prowlness"
Terrific characterization of Starscream! Love your work!
Zynk
DemonSurfer chapter 16 . 1/27/2012
Putting a bookmark here as I think I'm all "Swooped out" and the bookmarks feature is missing.

It's looking awesome so far, though!
Lily Avalon chapter 23 . 3/23/2011
Only just found this story yesterday, but I found myself reading nonstop.

So much squee! I'll admit, even knowing it was an AU, it was a bit rough in the beginning, just jumping in and all, but you write so well and it is such a neat idea I just had to stick with it. And what an excellent payoff!

You may have just made Swoop/Starscream an OTP for me. I mean, really, I can only see it working with a mature Swoop like what you have, and maybe it only really works with the situation you have, but, but, they were so cute! And I love how this wasn't really a romance, but that affection still grew between them anyway. :3

I... I don't really know what else to say about it. :D It was overall a very awesome, well-put-together story, and is definitely insta-fave material. Thank you very much for writing and sharing it!
Steven Kodaly chapter 23 . 3/12/2011
So, now I've got to read the other stories in this continuity. In the meantime, how long before Swoop and Starscream conquer the universe?
Carmilla DeWinter chapter 23 . 2/28/2011
Grand writing, as always. I'm rather happy I left halfway until this fic was finished - the cliffhangers would have been murder on my nervous system.

And, as I remarked somewhere else: there's an amazing variety of ways not to say 'I love you'. That means, the ending left me in pure fangirly squee.
Ell Bee Someone Else Now chapter 23 . 2/27/2011
The perfect ending to a darn' near perfect story. Complex, complicated, emotionally truthful, and very satisfying indeed.
Ell Bee Someone Else Now chapter 22 . 2/27/2011
Lovely. Reminds me of reading good historical fiction: that's the exact parallel to Swoop's position. Scheme and plot so wisely as you must, dear queen, for all depend upon you ...
Ell Bee Someone Else Now chapter 21 . 2/27/2011
Well of course Megatron would get her with spark; what was the point, otherwise? Some heavy decisions ahead. When I get done with this and its sequel, I shall indeed read all 29 of your other stories. Preferably at once.
Ell Bee Someone Else Now chapter 20 . 2/27/2011
Non-con is extremely hard to work into fiction; it is the act of soul-destruction, and nothing, nothing, justifies it. I adore your solution. I also adored Swoop's (well, really, yours as well ...).
Ell Bee Someone Else Now chapter 19 . 2/27/2011
Ah, the feces get ready to impact the rotary air-movement device!
Ell Bee Someone Else Now chapter 18 . 2/27/2011
Good grief, dear writer, I hope never to become your personal enemy. Great plotting, superb nastiness on Megsy's part.
Ell Bee Someone Else Now chapter 17 . 2/27/2011
As complex and satisfying as a good red wine.

Any alcohol-containing drink in sufficient quantity, come to think of it. Possible exception of scotch and soda; this story's much much nicer than that stuff.
Ell Bee Someone Else Now chapter 16 . 2/27/2011
You know, when you read the history of the British Isles, it's about a 99.8% chance that, as recently as 1930, Elizabeth of Windsor would never have been at short odds to become queen. Swoop's story is exactly like that.

Well, except for the Duchess of Windsor. But maybe that's Starscream, after all.
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