Reviews for Conquest of the Emperor: The World of Naruto
Guest chapter 12 . 2/15/2013
You haven't even explained where these guys come from, how they acquired 20th century technology and each personalities' history.
Guest chapter 7 . 2/15/2013
V Even Hashirama Senju, 1st Hokage, commented that the naruto world was "always at war."
Guest chapter 7 . 2/15/2013
Con't...

The reason pain is going along with this plan is that nations are constantly going to war with each other significantly more than the real world. This probably is because they are trying to acquire the other nation resources, territories etc. There is probably a hundred different reasons for going to war in the Narutoverse; we just aren't being shown those reasons. The peacetime seen in the anime and manga is an unusually long period of peace; before, during the times of the 1st,2nd, and 3rd Hokages, there were LOTS and LOTS of wars.

The point here is Pain's plan is to significantly reduce the frequency of war in Naruto verse significantly.
Guest chapter 7 . 2/15/2013
You are... not very good on how weapons of mass destruction are used right?

Look, taking page notes from nuclear tactics, there two types of targets for weapons of mass destruction: counter value targets and counter force targets.

Counter value targets are the cities,ports and civilians of the enemy nation. Counter force targets are the military forces and their own wmds.

Now pain's plan revolves around making prolonged peace in-between brief periods of destruction via Mutally assured destruction. To do that, pain establishes Akatsuki- a rich organization with extremely powerful military forces. He first intend to corner the shinobi market by being the cheaper alternative to Shinobi villages. By having many nations depend on them for firepower, pain ensures that akatsuki holds all the political and military power. Then he'll then introduce the Supped-up Tailed-beast bomb technique powered by all nine beasts.

Using this WMD, Pain then shows the world how terrifying the weapon is; causing them to get scared of using this weapon for their wars. From then on all wars would be brief or be settled politically. I don't see how it could be a bad plan for peace when all pain has to do is scale down the weapons power and target only Counter force targets.
Shinen no Hikari chapter 11 . 7/4/2011
Madara would be able to go intangibile long enough to survive a nuclear blast and he could probably teleport out of the fallout zone, though it'd be better for him to do such when he sees the flash. If it were Kakashi he could just use kamui but it's unknown whether Madara can do that.
god of all chapter 10 . 5/11/2011
Great chapter and story so far pleases continue this story soon.
ObsidianUnknown66 chapter 8 . 6/3/2010
Great outcome in the battle showing just how poerful the Grand Empire forces are. Please update soon.

P.S could you also update your avatar story also that to looks great.
Shinen no Hikari chapter 7 . 5/23/2010
a problem exists with your 2nd flaw and that is that womd's of a magnitude that pein speaks of do exist and while there is no absolute peace it's fairly more peaceful than the days of the world wars. also i think your overpowering these guys especially against someone like pein who has 7 physical bodies
ObsidianUnknown66 chapter 7 . 5/21/2010
Nice plot twist. Please update soon
ObsidianUnknown66 chapter 6 . 5/2/2010
Nice! Keep it up. The question Axurhotep asked Deidra and Sasori is that hinting Grand Empire will try to recruit Akatsuki members. Was the being described in the poem the Emperor?

Hope you update again soon.
ObsidianUnknown66 chapter 5 . 5/1/2010
Thanks for going on with the story after the long wait. Glad to see you keeping on Shippuden storyline. Cant wait to see how Grand Empire will affect it. Keep it going the stories great but could you please update sooner and with more in the chapters. This is a great story already and the suspense waiting so long in between is killing me. Keep it up.

P.S will the Grand Empire Field Marshal have any powers aside from GE tech. just curious.
ObsidianUnknown66 chapter 4 . 2/5/2010
Keep it up. This story looks like a great one in the making. Hope you keep up the shippuden storyline for this. Please update soon.
Shinen no Hikari chapter 4 . 2/3/2010
well guess i got one wrong. but anyway you should probably realize that gaara's sand armor underneath his sand shield would've probably stopped the dart
deitarionSSokolow chapter 4 . 2/1/2010
I dunno. I'm just not feeling any interest anymore and I'm not sure why.
Shinen no Hikari chapter 2 . 1/17/2010
what the lands of sky and iron weren't good enough?
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