|Reviews for Moving|
| Jacquelyn chapter 1 . 3/8
I can't believe this, but I cried in the middle of your story. You write emotions really well, and I could completely picture and feel everything Troy was going through. That's the mark of a good writer, right there. Great work!
| JennCorinthos chapter 1 . 8/29/2010
This was great.. I loved it.. Poor Troy lol... He is such a guy...
| philipno2 chapter 1 . 12/30/2009
Aw that's so cute. I love the ending!
| youliveandlearn chapter 1 . 9/16/2009
That was really cute how Gabriella helped Troy move for the first time! Very unique...great job!
| milly4 chapter 1 . 9/15/2009
that was cute I liked it
| sunnycouger chapter 1 . 9/15/2009
This was cute. The formatting in regards to the spacing was a little weird though, although I know has been messed up for the last few days so that's maybe responsible, but just to let you know.
It was good though, very sweet. Nice work.