Reviews for Prom
PurpleAngel87 chapter 1 . 3/24/2010
Aw. Just so aw worthy. And Joe - what an idiot. I loved how they noth interpreted not being like Stella and Joe as two different things. But this was awesome. Just so awesome. And I loved that Ellie got her happy ending in such a perfect way. She has to be my most favourite OC ever. (Even though I think she may be the only one I've ever seriously read).

Awesome job!
Karma22 chapter 1 . 3/1/2010
I loved all of these little Frankie/Ellie stories! So cute! I was also just wondering if you were ever going to resolve the Kevin/Macy arc (My new favorite JONAS ship!) and is Nick ever gonna get a girlfriend? Serious questions!
Jessica chapter 1 . 12/16/2009
I love this story!
sashapotter chapter 1 . 10/31/2009
Aww, I really do love Frankie and Ellie. They are the cutest. Love this to bits!

xovickixo chapter 1 . 9/23/2009
This was a lovely add on to this, uhm, 'verse'!

I like how the dynamic between the brothers has changed slightly now that Frankie is a teen.

Hahaha, the prom bear is fab. So Kevin!

Gotta love that the fire pole holes are still garnering trouble for the Lucas men.

So, yes, fun! Sweet! Yay for Frankie and Ellie!
MissNata13 chapter 1 . 9/18/2009
AW! I'm pouting up a storm here because that was the most incredible fluffy story I've ever read. Apparently, I missed a couple of JONAS because for some reason. I thought they were kids in the very beginning. I just want to pinch Frankie's and Ellie's cheecks because they are so darn adorable. Great fic, as always. I don't think you ever have a bad day in writing, lucky for you and great for me.


faerietaleredux chapter 1 . 9/17/2009
"Kevin, who had just taken a sip of water, spit the entire mouthful out in Joe’s face.“ Haha, that image is hilarious for some reason. :)

“Like, Joe. He filled Stella’s locker with roses and serenaded her in the hallway.” This was a wonderful choice. I know you were debating what you'd have Joe do, but this works really nicely. It's not over the top, but it's seriously sweet. Reminds me of what your hubby did for you (or, should I say one of his romantic gestures).

‘I hope beary much that you’ll go to prom with me’,”... Such a Kevin thing. I appreciate it even more since it brings to mind this hilarious scene from Veronica Mars, featuring two characters who couldn't be more opposite from Kev:

Logan: What, like, will we ever hang out at the mall, or hold hands and buy each other teddy bears with little hearts that say 'I wuv you beary much'?

Veronica: Yes. Exactly that. Except I want my bear won through some sort of demonstration of ring tossing ability.

Sorry, I love that scene. So the bear reference makes me smile especially big.

“We can’t help you if you don’t talk to us, little brother.” Very in character. I can totally picture Frankie being the one brother who doesn't come and talk about everything with the rest of the fam. He's not a part of the trio, even though they all love each other. So it definitely makes sense that he wouldn't necessarily talk to them about least at first.

“Pretty much all of it. You have three big holes in the ceiling so sound really carries.” Haha, I love how she delivers that line. And yet, poor Frankie! How awkward not only to be caught, but to be caught pretty much in front of everyone. So awkward.

I kid of enjoyed that Frankie and Ellie were just really close friends. But it does seem like a natural progression to make that grow into something more. At least they're both on the same page. It's sad but a lot of times the desire for romance doesn't happen on both sides of the relationship, and that's when things get really awkward.

Before he could say anything, he heard a voice call down, “You should kiss her now!” The announcement was quickly followed by a loud, “Ouch! Stella that hurt!”- Ok, I just love that part. Joe cracks me up so much! As do you, of course. :)

Thanks for a great read. It's been so long since I read Jonas fic, or fic in general really. It was a lovely way to ease back into the fic world.
JennyMoriarty chapter 1 . 9/17/2009

I much prefer 'Freleanor' to 'Jella'.

They're just too cute!

Say, um, I a sucker for sequels so I was kinda wondering if you'd do another one?

For Kevin and Macy?

Cause they're by far my favourite.

Oh, and I'm guessing Nick and Angelina didn't work out.

But that's okay.

I didn't really like her anyway. He'd probably be better off with one of the girls that Ellie and Frankie randomly grabbed from outside...


I loved it.

Honestly and truly.

Loved it.

It wasn't as cliché as most of the 'best friend' stories and I really appriciated that.

ride2night chapter 1 . 9/16/2009
Ok so I missed this when I was on a JONAS spree through your profile! How is it possible?

Well this was wonderful!

Ellie and Frankie are SO...perfect! Haha I can't think of any other word!

I'm kinda sad that their story is over but I love how it ended:]

Solitaire42 chapter 1 . 9/15/2009
Aw! This was super cute! I really enjoyed Joe's comment and Stella's non-verbal response : D
JessitheBlonde chapter 1 . 9/15/2009
I love all your Frankie/Ellie future fics. They're adoreable! And it's kinda neat to think about what Frankie and the other Jonai will look like in 10 years. D Awesome story.
of self chapter 1 . 9/15/2009
Hehee. I love how Kevin spat water on Joe's face.

I voted for this so I am really happy to see this come up. Poor Frankie, he knew he liked her when he wanted to punch that guy. I love how the realization has been building but come to fore only when an other harmless guy gives her a flower. I would've like to seen how he handled it if another guy kissed her. He would have had a conniption for sure. :D

I love when he goes to his brothers, all three of them can immediately see what is wrong with the way he asks her. Aha! I love Kevin-watching high school musical and all. And I loved how he asked Macy out.

Aw, Ellie walked in when he was pouring his heart out. But yeah, holes in your ceiling are kind of detrimental like that.

Ellie is so my kinda girl. She uses the word discombobulated. How many people would do that huh? Love her. :)

In the end, I'm thankful that even she felt the same way cause these two are really too adorable to not be together. Besides, don't best friends usually make the best kind of couples. I don't know about it personally but I have heard many people say so. I am equally glad that they decided not be as hare-brained as Joe and Stella though. What nonsense seriously, being teens and deciding not to do anything about UST which gets annoying to watch.

Aw, lovely ending. I am melting with happiness for these two. I am sad to see Ellie go but hey, I am glad she went out on a happy note. Great job. :)
Crystal Starling chapter 1 . 9/15/2009
"You should kiss her!... Ouch!" Way to go Stella and Ellie!
A Heart on my Hand chapter 1 . 9/15/2009
Oh, thse kids are just the cutest things I've ever read! It's sorta hard to picture little frankie as a teen, but I think I have a pretty good idea of what he would look like. Ellie is sort of easier to picture. I really hope you write more about them, their on my list of favorite couples. Well, my mental one anyway. I have too many to write them all down. But seriously, write more. I give them, and this story 5 stars. * * * * *. Love it!
LiveLaughLoveFP chapter 1 . 9/15/2009
Haha, cute. I like the part with Joe. It was funny. I also like how Ellie kinda took charge when Frankie was being a teenage boy. Adorable. Good job!
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