Reviews for Thoughtless
FrozenPride chapter 1 . 1/9/2012
AGGGGGGGHH! Why'd it have to end there?

Great story!
Lex chapter 1 . 11/1/2010
Amazing. The word choice was exquistite. The details made me feel as if I were watching it happen. It was utterly amazing, no doubt.
i dont need no name chapter 4 . 6/29/2010
definately do more! or i will throw squiarls at your house!
Shironami-Whitewave chapter 4 . 5/16/2010
Damn that was good. I worship your ability to write smut.
AmoraPyra chapter 4 . 5/16/2010
aww man. i can't believe you stopped there. it was starting to get really good. i really hope you write the next chapter very soon. :)
Superior of the In-between chapter 4 . 5/15/2010
This gets more and more interesting everytime. Man, I can't wait for the next chapters. I love your ideas!
Superior of the In-between chapter 3 . 5/10/2010
I WANT MORE! YOU MUST continue, pleeeaassee!
Harusaki chapter 3 . 12/7/2009
* waves cowboy hat* wo ho! Boo yeah! Now the fun is really getting going! I just can't wait to find out what happens next! How does Vexen react to the knowledge that he can now have babies, and what will the rest of the castle do when they eventually find out?

Evil marly, *evil grin* I can just see the chaos about to unfold!


Please finish the story! I want to know what happens!
Harusaki chapter 1 . 12/7/2009
O! never read a vexen/marly before. Marly is a mean phsyco isn't he?

Poor vexen, but this looks very exciting! I just adore man babies!
beelzababe chapter 3 . 10/30/2009
I love your story quite a bit and I like your wording and detail. Your skills pass mine by far. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Shironami-Whitewave chapter 3 . 10/15/2009
Awesome. Completely Awesome. And amazing. This story is the best MarVex mpreg I've ever read. And it's only chapter 3. Please please please update soon. I can't wait to read more of this.
Brinkmess chapter 3 . 10/14/2009

that was disturbing...


...give me more!

Esinahs chapter 3 . 10/13/2009
Really good job with tihs story. This is the first story I've read in which Marluxia actually takes over the organization so it's intersting to read, and your Vexen/Marluxia pairing goes well with the story. Also you have very advanced writing skills (you said you were a beginner, hm...) so I hope you continue this.
AnimatedSM1 chapter 3 . 10/13/2009
holy crap this is getting good! Will it be a boy or a girl?
Yuga-naru-Kyojin chapter 2 . 10/6/2009
After Vexen was raped, he enjoys sex with Marluxia?

Rather creepy ending... I like it xD

Your story is great und must be written faster x.x'

I want to read on!

If you needed a beta, I would do it for you.'

Just tell me

Bye bye, and greetings
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