Reviews for Daedalus in Exile
Lona W. Hall chapter 3 . 10/27/2011
I like that this Edward isn't the "goody goody" the original is. He seems to have more depth...more room to grow at the same time lol
Lona W. Hall chapter 2 . 10/27/2011
Oooo, cant wait to find out why Bella is in those woods...I hope she was looking for Edward :) Love your writing style!
Lona W. Hall chapter 1 . 10/27/2011
Hi, came here on a recommendation from another fic (sorry, forgot name...night...something? I think by Katinki?) anyway, firstvchapter is definetely interesting. It does seem different from your usual based on the descriptions I saw in your profile. Big fan of the dark here so I'm looking forward to this one? Thanks for sharing!
Ticcing Bat chapter 21 . 10/26/2011
Soooo good
Lipbitestew chapter 16 . 10/2/2011
That made me let out a breath at the end! Reminds me of the lion and lamb convo.
Lipbitestew chapter 15 . 10/2/2011
Well then. Nevermind on my previous review. Lol.
Lipbitestew chapter 14 . 10/2/2011
I probably should have asked a chapter or two ago but if the Cullens know Bella is there wouldn't they be more worried about getting her proper medical/neurological treatment? Unless Alice saw that she would be fine. I have been thinking all along though that when B finds out the truth she will be angry for that reason.
Lipbitestew chapter 11 . 10/1/2011
Aw come on Edward. Such a typical guy to get nervous when a girl starts becoming domestic in their territory (referring to the tea she made.)
WardLover TwiFan chapter 21 . 9/9/2011
Yeah, I finished a few minutes ago and you DID have me worried there as we got closer to the end. I don't think I expected him to kill her. I just thought he might refuse to change her. That was a REALLY good vamp fic. Most of the stories I read are AH. My alert list and my TBR list are insanely long. If I'd not read those two one shots of yours last night I probably would have put off reading DiE a bit longer. I definately neglected a few RL responsibilities today so that I could finish this. I really enjoyed this.

Any chance you're making the Twitarded trip to Forks later this month? I didn't go last year, but a friend and I decided we couldn't miss out this year. The plane tix are purchased and the hotel reserved.

WardLover TwiFan chapter 20 . 9/9/2011
That was awesome. It was frantic and passionate and primal all at the same time. NEVER bet against Alice! -Monique
WardLover TwiFan chapter 19 . 9/9/2011
By murder I hope she means change. Alice won't end her human life, but Edward will. I think the damage from Bella's original head injury is getting worse and her life will end early. The Cullens love her and know she's Edward's mate so they want her changed before she dies. Crossing my fingers... -Monique
WardLover TwiFan chapter 18 . 9/9/2011
Now I'm getting a little nervous. I'm not sure if I'm going to like the way this ends. I'm an HEA girl and things aren't looking so good right now. I'm trying to trust in Alice that this will all end well, but it's pretty tough to do. -Monique
WardLover TwiFan chapter 17 . 9/9/2011
Well now, Alice doesn't want to be all that helpfull, does she? Or does? -Monique
WardLover TwiFan chapter 16 . 9/9/2011
That scene at the end was so sensual it was better than any lemon you could have written. Is Bella going to freak out when she finds out what the markers are all about? Is she going to be understanding and forgiving? I hope so. -Monique
WardLover TwiFan chapter 15 . 9/9/2011
Again, hated hearing about him killing another girl, but loved that he isn't going to force Bella to leave. -Monique
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