Reviews for Daedalus in Exile
Lipbitestew chapter 14 . 10/2/2011
I probably should have asked a chapter or two ago but if the Cullens know Bella is there wouldn't they be more worried about getting her proper medical/neurological treatment? Unless Alice saw that she would be fine. I have been thinking all along though that when B finds out the truth she will be angry for that reason.
Lipbitestew chapter 11 . 10/1/2011
Aw come on Edward. Such a typical guy to get nervous when a girl starts becoming domestic in their territory (referring to the tea she made.)
WardLover TwiFan chapter 21 . 9/9/2011
Yeah, I finished a few minutes ago and you DID have me worried there as we got closer to the end. I don't think I expected him to kill her. I just thought he might refuse to change her. That was a REALLY good vamp fic. Most of the stories I read are AH. My alert list and my TBR list are insanely long. If I'd not read those two one shots of yours last night I probably would have put off reading DiE a bit longer. I definately neglected a few RL responsibilities today so that I could finish this. I really enjoyed this.

Any chance you're making the Twitarded trip to Forks later this month? I didn't go last year, but a friend and I decided we couldn't miss out this year. The plane tix are purchased and the hotel reserved.

-Monique
WardLover TwiFan chapter 20 . 9/9/2011
That was awesome. It was frantic and passionate and primal all at the same time. NEVER bet against Alice! -Monique
WardLover TwiFan chapter 19 . 9/9/2011
By murder I hope she means change. Alice won't end her human life, but Edward will. I think the damage from Bella's original head injury is getting worse and her life will end early. The Cullens love her and know she's Edward's mate so they want her changed before she dies. Crossing my fingers... -Monique
WardLover TwiFan chapter 18 . 9/9/2011
Now I'm getting a little nervous. I'm not sure if I'm going to like the way this ends. I'm an HEA girl and things aren't looking so good right now. I'm trying to trust in Alice that this will all end well, but it's pretty tough to do. -Monique
WardLover TwiFan chapter 17 . 9/9/2011
Well now, Alice doesn't want to be all that helpfull, does she? Or does? -Monique
WardLover TwiFan chapter 16 . 9/9/2011
That scene at the end was so sensual it was better than any lemon you could have written. Is Bella going to freak out when she finds out what the markers are all about? Is she going to be understanding and forgiving? I hope so. -Monique
WardLover TwiFan chapter 15 . 9/9/2011
Again, hated hearing about him killing another girl, but loved that he isn't going to force Bella to leave. -Monique
WardLover TwiFan chapter 14 . 9/9/2011
Yes, I'm still confused but I have faith. Truthfully I'm glad that it's only a 21 chapter story cause I knw I won't to wait too long for answers. Is he really going to take her back to civilization? Does she even want to go? I know I don't want her to. -Monique
WardLover TwiFan chapter 13 . 9/9/2011
I'm so very confused. Carlisle knows, right? They all do? The test is going to be whether he can turn Bella because if he doesn't she's going to die. Right? No? Urrrrgggg. And of course I have to step away right now to take of RL. Hopefully I can get back to this tonight. -Monique
WardLover TwiFan chapter 12 . 9/9/2011
Is there more to Bella's multiple head injuries? Are they accumulating enough damage for her to have a permanent affliction or something terminal? Am I reading too much into this? Again, Carlilse managed to call when Edward was out of the house and away from Bella. Coincidence? Maybe, maybe not.

Your rec of With Teeth...great story. It's a bit hard to read (angsty) but well worth it.

-Monique
WardLover TwiFan chapter 11 . 9/9/2011
ALICE was the one who saved her from the sliding van! And, of course, Carlisle treated her after the accident. I'm even more convinced that Alice had a vision of Bella and Edward together in the future and all of the Cullens having some role in Bella being where she is now. I hope I'm right. -Monique
WardLover TwiFan chapter 10 . 9/9/2011
Oh, Edward, I'm so disappointed that you drank from that hiker. But I do give you credit for allowing him to live and if you needed to do it to keep Bella safe then I forgive you.

I'm not sure I'd be buying Edward's excuses for the crushed wood but I guess they sound reasonable. When Bella's memory comes back I hope she's understanding of why he's lied to her. He really doesn't have any choice without knowing what Bella knows of the Cullens' true nature. -Monique
WardLover TwiFan chapter 9 . 9/9/2011
Wow, I can't believe he revealed so much about his relationship with is family. If her memory returns it probably won't really matter that he did. If she's close with Alice she probably knows about him and his absence from the family. Maybe that plays a part in why she was in the forest.

-Monique
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