Reviews for Daedalus in Exile
WardLover TwiFan chapter 16 . 9/9/2011
That scene at the end was so sensual it was better than any lemon you could have written. Is Bella going to freak out when she finds out what the markers are all about? Is she going to be understanding and forgiving? I hope so. -Monique
WardLover TwiFan chapter 15 . 9/9/2011
Again, hated hearing about him killing another girl, but loved that he isn't going to force Bella to leave. -Monique
WardLover TwiFan chapter 14 . 9/9/2011
Yes, I'm still confused but I have faith. Truthfully I'm glad that it's only a 21 chapter story cause I knw I won't to wait too long for answers. Is he really going to take her back to civilization? Does she even want to go? I know I don't want her to. -Monique
WardLover TwiFan chapter 13 . 9/9/2011
I'm so very confused. Carlisle knows, right? They all do? The test is going to be whether he can turn Bella because if he doesn't she's going to die. Right? No? Urrrrgggg. And of course I have to step away right now to take of RL. Hopefully I can get back to this tonight. -Monique
WardLover TwiFan chapter 12 . 9/9/2011
Is there more to Bella's multiple head injuries? Are they accumulating enough damage for her to have a permanent affliction or something terminal? Am I reading too much into this? Again, Carlilse managed to call when Edward was out of the house and away from Bella. Coincidence? Maybe, maybe not.

Your rec of With Teeth...great story. It's a bit hard to read (angsty) but well worth it.

-Monique
WardLover TwiFan chapter 11 . 9/9/2011
ALICE was the one who saved her from the sliding van! And, of course, Carlisle treated her after the accident. I'm even more convinced that Alice had a vision of Bella and Edward together in the future and all of the Cullens having some role in Bella being where she is now. I hope I'm right. -Monique
WardLover TwiFan chapter 10 . 9/9/2011
Oh, Edward, I'm so disappointed that you drank from that hiker. But I do give you credit for allowing him to live and if you needed to do it to keep Bella safe then I forgive you.

I'm not sure I'd be buying Edward's excuses for the crushed wood but I guess they sound reasonable. When Bella's memory comes back I hope she's understanding of why he's lied to her. He really doesn't have any choice without knowing what Bella knows of the Cullens' true nature. -Monique
WardLover TwiFan chapter 9 . 9/9/2011
Wow, I can't believe he revealed so much about his relationship with is family. If her memory returns it probably won't really matter that he did. If she's close with Alice she probably knows about him and his absence from the family. Maybe that plays a part in why she was in the forest.

-Monique
WardLover TwiFan chapter 8 . 9/9/2011
She notices he's different but not in the way he would expect. She's definately keeping him on his toes. -Monique
WardLover TwiFan chapter 7 . 9/9/2011
Hmmm, interesting that Carlilse called just now. He even called when Edawrd was out of the house and away from Bella-great timing. I think he knows but Alice has said everything will be okay. Of course, I never seem to guess plots correctly. I guess that's why I read but don't write. I hate hearing the story of Edward's human kills but it's a necessary part of the story to see where he's been and where he needs to go. Funny you rec'd ForeverYoung82's Between the Madness and the Fire. That's one of my all time favs and one of the first fics I read. Too bad she never finished it. -Monique
WardLover TwiFan chapter 6 . 9/9/2011
I was anxious to hear WHY she was wondering in the North Carolina woods. With her memory loss I guess I won't be finding out anytime soon. I'm anxious now to find out why Alice still persued a friendship with her. I can only assuem it's because she knows that Bella will still ultimately be Edward's mate. It's Edward that still has to figure that out. At least I HOPE that's the case. -Monique
WardLover TwiFan chapter 5 . 9/9/2011
What to do? Waht to do? Poor conflicted Edward. I like that he told her he was a doctor. I think that was a good choice at the time. -Monique
WardLover TwiFan chapter 4 . 9/9/2011
I enjoyed the way he spoke out loud in order to justify his actions. It amused me that he felt like he was doing something wrong by changing her clothes when in reality it was something that needed to be done. He was very much a gentleman when doing so. :-)

-Monique
WardLover TwiFan chapter 3 . 9/9/2011
He's chosen to nurse her back to health rather than change her (I knew he wasn't going to kill her or it would be a really short story). I know he wasn't contemplating changing her in the last chapter, but it could have happened in a spur of the moment decision. I like that he's drawn to her but she isn't his "reason for being." At least not yet. In your version he took off after that intial meeting in Forks so he really doesn't know her yet. He needs time to get to know her.

-Monique
WardLover TwiFan chapter 2 . 9/8/2011
Ooooo, I really want to press on to the next chapter to see if he changes her or merely nurses her back to health. But it's late...and there's an Amishward outtake that just posted...so...I'll try to check back in tomorrow.

-Monqiue
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